Regular Battle
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela @miracle
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela @miracle
@Bag Mandela
His drive is coming to a screeching halt. ur fates been sealed
One uppercut will send u in the airbag, n hopefully thru a windshield
yoyoo
We started Ransom Writers n they keep askin why, It's cuz I'mma jack this guy and his wife,
And you got to provide a-tourney when you give Mir-and-her rights
mir this was pretty standard, nice flip and a bit of a twist on the punch. will say this was more of a witty landing that a harsh sting. its serviceable but doesnt go straight for the kill
bag i like the angle youre going for. i notice u go for complex wordplays but u gotta be careful with overdoing it. this play is reliant on some iffy pronunciation so it just didnt land right for me. just too many concepts at once that took away from an angle with potential
mvgt - miracle
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Solid bar from Mir as usual. I liked it. The relative simplicity works well.
As for Bag’s bar, I’ve seen the a-tourney wordplay a couple of times before but this was a fresh take on it. The Miranda rights was highly original, and fire. Works fine in my accent.
Vote- Bag