Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Jack Hallows @daveDILLY
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Jack Hallows @daveDILLY
sup champ.
M³
here
good luck
yo dis hoe scared! ima psycho killer - so u dont want 2go there..
my flows rare -
& the glock will put jack in a box if i pop up outta nowhere
dD…
this pred’ is incessant. he’s not of a respectable essence
the feds should arrest ‘im.. cuz big D behind baby d is his Initial sexual preference
Howl
M³
Dave’s was solid but a bit predictable. Saw a Jack in the box line last week, although this one was well put together.
Jack was pretty great here, very creative. I like lines like that which take advantage of the format / only work as text.
Vote- Jack
Dave, written reasonably well and the punch obviously works but I've heard stacks of jack-in-the-box lines so it didn't have as much impact for me.
Jack, creative angle (by which I mean creating that angle from his initials, not simply the pedo thing) nice rhyming throughout & closed it out well. First time I've seen you battle & I rated it. Got the w convincingly.
Vote Jack Hallows
dave wording was fire but the angles too predictable to capitalize on it. was a creative take but a played concept can only take u so far
jack i like the execution on this a lot of initial wordplays are corny but this was solid. the reference to initial i think is what sold it for me
mvgt - jack
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