upping for feedback, come on fam
upping for feedback, come on fam
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it was short but i enjoyed reading it..it got your point across, but if it didnt have to be a short project i think you could have really expanded on the topic...told the story of it from a jewish persons view or a soldiers view..could been very creative with it...but even tho it was short i enjoyed it and flowed to me nicely..worth the read
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Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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Ya, I agree with most of the other post's in this thread. It's more of a poem but steal a good topic with a steady rhyme scheme. I'd expect this type of thing to be made for a history class but nevertheless good rhymes and good imagery. Good overall just needs to sound more rapish? lol. Please RTF keep elevating.
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This was a good piece. More of a poem though. I digged how y ou didnt go with the regular bar and rhymed every other line. You used good words and did great with the holocaust topic and described it great. Nice Job.
thanks fam ill rtf when i get the chance
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
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