Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@Infamous 1 @ Mac.
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Infamous 1 @ Mac.
Last edited by MV; November 28th, 2022 at 01:41 PM
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YoO
none of your punches hit ‘Or Lando so you should relax
Before I let off Rockets and ‘1 hit ya T-Mac
Inf girl's the actress of the hood. covers her needs wit a hand and a hole
That cunt eatswood and suck seeds like she banged that actor for a role
Okay, so, both wordplays were terrible here. Infamous used his in the setup, and the way it impacted was just bad, so the following line was already overshadowed by the miss, then he used a nameflip on Mac, which in and of itself wasn't all that terrible, but the way he used the Rockets flip was kind of generic in that not only has it been done before (which sometimes I don't mind) but the only thing it really did was, again, generically tie in the nameflip. I liked how the entire bar was thematically centered on the nameflip, but the writing needed to get to that point was an eyesore.
Mac just said fuck using actual wordplays and nameflips, I'm just going to do a witty flip on Clint Eastwood's name and use Cunt Eatswood. I thought this bar was just...how was this a contenders match?
I'm going to give this to Infamous because he put alot more effort into it, a poor effort, yes, but his attempt at being creative was far more evident than what Mac did.
vote infamous
Both Punches were solid here I liked this match but imma lean with inf
On this it was just smoother execution.
Inf- I think you did the best with the wording you could here. The concept is solid, but for one reason or another it didn't have the wow factor some of your other bars have said. That being said, it's not a miss and it got the job done.
Mac- This unfortunately was a miss for me. Wasn't feeling the wordplay or honestly the concept as a whole and it just didn't read smooth either. Not many redeeming qualities in this one. To show some respect: you have dropped much much better than this and I appreciate the effort.
v/ Inf
Mac had a good concept it was creative but I wasn't feeling the execution. I felt like it needed to attack Infamous more. i didn't like inf's concept as much but his punch was more effective and was tailored to his opponent.
v/Inf
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Vote -Inf
Set up was a bit forced or the orlando portion, but the McGrady concept was executed nicely. Mac, I aint going to lie, this was pretty forced. It just whiffed for me, bud.
Inf wins