Fucka rhymescheme

[Kuhn]

Crush a perc down
Snort a line up
I figure you figured that I was doin fine huh?
That I been working steady just trying ta
Get my money high enough to escape the prison that binds us.
No luck tho
I been spending penny's to put petrol in the truck bro.
You think habits that are this ingrained
Are gonna leave me now like I flipped my brain
To it's off position?
I'll cough this instant
An I'll bet you my mom's prescription
That I'll hack up 4 percs and 2 vikes on the wall in the kitchen!
I got lawless visions mixed with
Awful convictions
Fucked up beyond recognition fallin in the halls cuz I'm judging the wrong dimensions
In each step
I'm 1 deep breath away from hittin this peak
This death.
So peep this mess
I'm too deep to be depressed
So I keep one P to sleep and regress
I mean,
if I treat these keys like seeds at these depths
I'll never have weed to beat the weak breaths.
So fuck your opinion
I don't mean to be step
Daddy to a kid that needs me to be less.
I'm tryna be grateful but the peeps are gettin left
Behind for the moment while I prove that D's the best.

[Joe Boston]

This was nice little self hype piece. Yo i wasnt bashing anything if the title is a shot towards me lol. I was implying in concious type pieces using metaphorical expression and good vocab content makes it stand out. This right here tells me your a punchline writer i am so myself. This had a great flow and the ryhme scheme and how u transitioned it was dope.

[Kuhn]

Lol no shot at you bro I just can't tell how this is formatted cuz my phone has all the text enlarged. Appreciate the feed tho man good to see you around still

[A Disciple]

Them back to backs though lmao