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Thread: From My Phone to Your Computer

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    Cause A Fuss Truth Iscariot's Avatar
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    From My Phone to Your Computer

    I'm typing away, writing to say the thoughts in my brain
    I'm far gone from your eyes of jade that lay waste to my pain
    I portray the type impervious to affections refrain - above the fray
    Now without clear green eyes I see I'm destined to be slain by the blade
    Of your love...Its strange how friendship fades into the gray
    Once lips lock, the guns cocked and a contraption for murder is made
    Beating heart is chained to certain dismay - but I wasn't afraid
    Because your time, good or bad was worth twice it's weight in gold
    I'm spellbound - fully under your control....

    I stop typing, hit the bowl
    pop my knuckles sigh and scold
    the bad weather which severes
    the connect for our pleasure
    so goes unclever actions
    fatal attractions and ill endeavors
    cliche fists beat my whole into fractions
    never/say/never

    now I'm not interested in my phone
    emptied the trash pit inside of my dome
    released the Kraken so you could know
    The wrath you've invoked in me
    Truthfully you've awoken me
    And like an angry Dragon I spit flame
    and curse the name of those who disturb the still
    The type who write silly poetry and make for the perfect kill
    And it's your will! of course. the choice was always yours
    it's fine. divorce from the shared space and intercourse

    I'm writing to say that I'm done!
    Last edited by Truth Iscariot; June 14th, 2014 at 03:39 AM

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    Whatever, Fuck You HighEngineChief's Avatar
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    Re: From My Phone to Your Computer

    This was dope balls. The flow was on point throughout the entirety and had this poetic feel to it that fit perfect. The second verse was really cool. The never say never fractions play was well executed. You had a lot of clever lines like the silly poetry makes for a perfect kill, and as a whole the everything fit together. My only critique is one or two missing apostrophes. That said, this was short and sweet. Not a lot of people can say so much in so few words. Nice drop Truth.

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