Jeff vs. DopePoet

[#PrimeTime]

upp

[The Phantom...]

dopepoet

nothin...

vs

jeffry

dont ask dont tell this fag better be in front of me ill be right behind ya,
hes a flamer ill destroy this fool when i come to gilbert south carolina


this was still lackin alot from both ends, but i thought it was obvious jeff took this. not alot to critique on, but he had more attempts and some better structure which is why he took it.

vote-> jeffry

open battle links->http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...497/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...001/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...457/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...532/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...580/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...546/index.html

i know theres alot...by try and vote up on atleast 1 of em. lol

peace.

[#PrimeTime]

upp

[#PrimeTime]

upp

[ArchDevil]

absolutely nothing

vs.

dopepoet what the hell is this fool? he's fuckin sick im here to murder ya,
he's on that game-cock, messin around guys coachin like steve spurrier,


one sided battle...no hate but dopepoet came very weak, wasnt feelin this structure, some of that made no sense, no hits towards the opponent...jeff came clean, good enough to get this win
vote - jeff