Scientific (1-1) vs. SyaNidal (1-1)

[Noodle]

Rules and Regulations

Good Luck!

[Soul Slayer]

Don't you dare show for this match dude not until ther collab is done. lol

[Steven William]

I'm gonna piss on the collab verse and shit all over this match, then wipe my ass with the W.

[Soul Slayer]

I'll post when i get back from registration today

[Soul Slayer]

Where Is Our Protection?

Lies pierced my heart,
painting confusion and hate
Sober convictions

Dreams buckled & broke, condemned to senseless idiocy
My conscience choked, playing victim, swallowed by democracy.
Hope of teen nation amounted to nothing but dust,
Burning in uncertain flames like a pending burst.
Revolt and disgust pumped through our veins spreading lust
Like an outbreak, infesting pain and love for the dollar.
Yet this world’s controlled by outrage, you’d swear it’s bipolar.
Politics turn to pole-tricks, men without honor and vision
It’s no wonder we live a fantasy, taxed for their delusions.
The world would have been better without all prior illusions.

I speak without a voice coz talk is cheap, hiding behind words
Speech’s my sanctuary; choice is limited like a blind bird.
Once, we thought these lands would leak milk and honey
Mislead by power hungry posers with an eye for money,
Using the ghost of Martin Luther to haunt of sanctuary
Propaganda isn’t momentary; they’ve used us for centuries.
Like occult rituals, real snakes, greedy and crooked like Julianni,
sabotaging the songs of our heroes and heroines like the illuminati.
The church’s my refuge; word of God’s my strength, my stone
From all the filth we live in, a circus. Don’t be fooled no one’s prone.

Evil hides behind the innocence of a child, keep em from the wild
Plant fruit bearing seed at any early age, keep our dream safe

……..Be the change you want to see………..

[Steven William]

I always start off “back in the day”, so I didn’t for once
In week one I noted, how I wrote shit -skipped lunch
But yall some bitch cunts, you’ll say I’m recyclin’ lines
When I’m just citin’ my sources that I write in my mind
See I been writin’ since 9th, 8th, 6th and even 4th grade
And all the shit that lead up this, was just the foreplay
I’m tellin’ all you dumb fucks that bein’ nice was dumb-luck
But nobody believes a nobody could see he’s fuckin’ dumb-struck.
I just heard the beat, the hit, the kick and how the drum struck
Even I, couldn’t see this guy, droppin’ shit like dump trucks
Grabbed my books and bag, my Reebok’s always pumped up
and Fired on every kid that rode the bus, on some Trump stuff
Used to Ball and Kick it on the diamond after rushed lunch
I was nailin’ all the pegs, had kids cryin’ on some tough junk
Older dudes, think they holdin’ rules violent on that tough stuff
I never sighed or budged once, ‘cause that’s how Sya does, cuz.
We were riders, thug love, but recess always ended quick
Had us puttin’ vocab into sentences, with penmanship
I bullshitted all of my homework just so I could lesson shit
-or rhymed every subject, verb, past-tense and predicate
What’s the wonder as to why years later I’m just deadin’ shit?
Writin’ rhymin’ speeches to present with the president
Don’t know what ya messin’ with, started out cassettin’ hits
You faggots aren’t catchin’ wind, you couldn’t take a breath of this.
I been doin’ this Forever kids, since Kanye went and wrecked his whip
Em killed all the precedents n’ Young Money got no record spins
How can they even step to this? I’m sorry I was blessed with gifts
And never had expected bliss from smashing all the estimates
So don’t fault my Deceptive wits for any sign of friendliness
Now Primed I’m a Pessimist, my timelines always end at sick.
I learned all of the Techish shit, burned through all the crevices
Found new Men and Methods then realized that I Red this shit

This drop is just a reminisce, I start and stop, progress and quit
Been Rapped in music long enough to know hip-hops the mess of it.


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[Tactixx]

Well...
Scientific....How come you dropped a piece so short?....It was worded decently....but it completely lacked any sort of solid storyline or content...even with the small amount of lines the emotion was felt..but against someone like Syanidal...you gotta come alot harder than that....

Syanidal....lol...after reading the chat thread....I kinda smiled when I started readin this..nice little rant piece...combined with the pic....(I knew you and a few others would pick this one, dunno why)...but it came with the usual barrage of multis...this piece really did show how you felt about the situation and it was a nice vent piece...keep em comin...peace..

V-Syanidal

[_Lyrics]

Scientific- lol you really wrote ten lines, this was either an insult to your opponent or you just didnt have time, anyways it's not like i wasn't feeling what I saw, it seems like you could of had a nice build up in content if you kept progressing. but the overall concept was unclear.. it was straight though, flow was ok just wasn't long or entertaining enough for me as a reader... no hate

SyaNidal- straight out to recess with a pen and pad you know how it goes, haha, straight flex piece sya, multis were well placed and I was feeling it, I been at it forever writing too, and not even rhyming all the time.. but anyways the flow was ok, some repeating got repetitive, maybe needs better wording.. I liked the last bar a lot cause it brought out the whole vibe of the piece imo, when you were straying off to the- fuck ya'll its my hiphop shit, i wasnt feeling it, but when you were trying to capture the essense of its impact on your childhood its what made the piece what it is IMO.. anyways cool read

v/SyaNidal

[Soul Slayer]

What is ths. I said id edit my piece when he shows. How do i do that now with these votes? Anyway kwel

[Brandon Cee]

What is ths. I said id edit my piece when he shows. How do i do that now with these votes? Anyway kwel

where did you say that? it's not anywhere.

[Soul Slayer]

Forget it man. My opponent sent me a pm and told me he had spoken to you, i then told him to post and i'd edit in my piece

[Messiah.]

Thats what I thought Scientific meant by I'll edit it when I get back from registration today. Hmm...

I'll edit with a vote here later.

[SMZ]

scientific - i'm guessing you did the almost rhymes on purpose? either that or you have a killer accent... iunno - it detracted from my enjoyment... the concept was coo... i wasn't pulled in

syanidal - flow's smooth... similar piece in some ways, i felt ur feelings tho... i liked it

sorry i'm getting tired and this vote is shorter... v/ syanidal tho

[Noodle]

Scientific, that was interesting, I'm not sure I feel you on the first section cause a lot of the rhyming words, well...they didn't rhyme well or at all imo. Sorry, but it made it really hard to follow for me and I couldn't enjoy it that much. Conceptually, an awesome idea cause God knows this is the type of shit we go through daily, all of us included, but not done as good as you could have. Syanidal, I'll never vote for a flex piece usually, but I really enjoyed the imagery in this. I loved the fact that you made yourself a little kid who felt like he was the shit on his first day, but it was really metaphorical for this league. I'm digging that really. Decent flow, some spots kinda stumbled, but for the most part, you did well. Good shit guys, but I got a winner with a better verse overall.

v/Syanidal

[Brandon Cee]

Sya wins (2-1)
Scientific loses (1-2)

CLOSED