bird of prey

[falc0n]

Vigilance is the essence no digression on picking off the weak,
Only a stifled whelp of sorrow rips the sky before it leaks.
Tears roll down from the thunder clouds, im soaring so swiftly
Bullets tear from pastures of farmers.... I squawk as the fuckers miss me
So misunderstood by many, I am in fact an elevation of evolution
More evolved then reptiles…
……………….my swags so high im soaring over all this pollution
I have the most accurate of eyesight, yea it’s like binocular vision
………My anatomy is so unique it’s classified in its own division
So listen, im never missing I swoop down as rodents flee from me
Disembowel thee and split your skull as I feed my youth in an aged tree,
I roost on most regular occasions … abrasions mark my chest,
So if my eyes are closed ill just fly off
……………………cause getting close to me was just a test
My talons could tear holes through prey so please prey I am full
My aggression I can hide, don’t mistake me, I can charge like a bull
Feathers align my body, rob me? I really doubt it cause you shouted
But caught a mouth of feather fluff, so I tore your guts to leave you outed
Believe me I am dangerous ill run on long legs and slash your back
Pick up the slack, im sharp as a tack as I devour this nine lived cat
Im soaring over valleys, rivers, lakes and mountains
Damn this view is so perfect
So ill soar with flow sicker then water fountains.


And yes we soar,
Never before
Was there a beast so untamed
So watch my wings separate your lies
Cause its all part of my game

no shame in how i copulate, im alone till breeding season
i fuck the chick and leave her there, nature is my only reason
im the type to spot you a mile away and if its hard for me to talk
it's cause i devour rodents like you and opt to fly off rather then walk
i broke my way through my own barriers when i cracked out of my shell
so don't expect me to sympathise when you claim your breaking from hell
my bird brain is so primitive so i choose to keep my rhyme scheme basic
so when i spit i keep it realistic to problems birds like me are facing
conservation, green peace and breeding captive populations
so strong genetics of my kind can distal future generations.
i don’t' migrate for the winter i stand and face the cold truth and facts
that polluting our atmosphere is like souldja boy............fucking whack

And yes we soar,
Never before
Was there a beast so untamed
So watch my wings separate your lies
Cause its all part of my game

[falc0n]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ad-399060.html http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ry-398943.html

[Kazper™]

wow dude, the first verse was pretty cool. You dropped it like the perspective of the falcon bird itself and pointed out alot of great details and really described it for what it was.

The second verse, I liked the concept and how you played it was alright but i think you coulda ended it better. The idea of how the bird relate's to you as a person really stood out reading this.

Your flows on point for the most part, but could be fixed in some spots.
Rhyme scheme, very basic nothing to complex... makes for a great easy read.

I like it. Good peice man


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nk-399845.html

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[J Mo]

Hey, that was an enjoyable read. Some of the comparisons were pretty simplistic (Pick up the slack, im sharp as a tack as I devour this nine lived cat) and vocab was pretty basic, but there were also some gems (But caught a mouth of feather fluff, so I tore your guts to leave you outed)

I'm also not sure if "distal" was a misspelling or not, because that's a word that I learned in anatomy in high school referencing body parts (so strong genetics of my kind can distal future generations).

But otherwise, creative piece! I appreciate the effort to think out of the box.


Not quite as creative but I hope you'll enjoy the flow
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...gs-399994.html

[highspirits]

where do i go to post a thread or do i just start off of someone elses?

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