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Thread: 12 Months of hell

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    12 Months of hell

    Bein in a cell for 12 months
    with no pen and no pad
    No dad at the time
    but at the time he wasnt mad
    Cellmates causin trouble He couldnt get to sleep
    He had a thing for words plus his style was unique
    Had a number of niggaz who he failed to eva meet
    Dreamed of gettin big livin the luxrious life
    Now hes scared as hell of ever takin the pipe



    Jus a lil something Ill post more to it when some ppl start commentin this.

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    Re: 12 Months of hell

    wtf? Read the rules kiddo.
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    Re: 12 Months of hell

    Like your last piece....the topic seemes dope but its undeveloped....you need to work on dropping a piece of atleast 16 lines.....and fill it with some vocab and multies or whatever.....and keep posting so we can get a feel for your writing style.....

    If you need help or anything liek that just pm me homie....I'll give you tips or whatever,,,,


    peace and stay up.

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