Ima 14 year old rapper jus lookin to get in touch with this rap shit.
C-R-E-A Then comes the m
made a deal with the devil
So my soul is condemned
First comes the money then comes respect
Swimmin in a pool of cash that runs up to my neck
bringin hip-hop back one step at a time
So you can see the Fight in me every time i rhyme
7 bars .. Tell me what you think.
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was pretty decent I guess.. flow was on point for sure.. definitely short though.. work on that... subject matter was pretty bland.. could have been more creative. keep at it kid.
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Keep practicing....peep some rhymes off the frontpage and I think every post in this forum haves to be atleast....16 lines....
So work on writing some longer stuff....this was amateurish and unappealing....
bye and I was being constructive as possible.
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