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Thread: Pressure : Right Before A Battle

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    Pressure : Right Before A Battle

    Behind the curtains , you're real

    singing gucci mane- my kitchen right before i sing a good school chorus




    Thinking of what im planning to say to this emcee and i'm watching him down

    Like as if i was a girl with my friends checking the guy out.....

    Okay, i see this cat has new kicks and a nice lining

    but i look on his body, all seems well


    im bout to take his old school cadillac to the rim shop then hes goin to jail

    I put on my white sox fitted and pre thinking before my presence is made


    i keep pondering throughout my mind........................
    as i think of punchlines and metaphores throughout my head

    Similar............, to engraved gang signs on the walls of the inside of my head

    I begin to kick it acapella as i see a couple fans watching me

    Feeling the rhythm and sound throughout my juggular vein....

    Throughout my mind , i feel a beat but the fans think im kicking it acapella

    and before i know it the microphone comes on with a loud squeaky sound....

    and a beat drops and my feet steps onto the stage....the crowd is in frenzy!

    I look my opponent in his eyes and the tension of glare into my eyes make me look to the clouds....Where gang signs remain gdn, all is well



    And i ride off into the clouds with lil thug gettin money , 10 pounds of some of dat killa old school chevy caprice 26's onit
    Last edited by Seedy; September 25th, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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    Good stuff, Liked the emotion and the word choice alot.

    Drop it in the Poetic Elevation forum for constructive criticism. You'll get alot better feedback.

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    Alright, and i mean...So what do you think you guys will let me in or what? and i appreciate this feedback
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    its the same in essence as emenems lose yourself
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    sigh,


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    Re: Pressure : Right Before A Battle

    hey on the real can i get feedback on g-p
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    Re: Pressure : Right Before A Battle

    time to re-up


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