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    Time After Time

    A man breath's his last breath, and what's left?
    darkness and silence, he meets his death
    because when the gun went off, my life was lost
    everything got bitch black, like the light's went off


    -Philly®



    A Friend Till The End

    Now, Chris was always the one to bring a smile to faces
    he'd win by miles in races, often times get wild in places
    and it was known, when out in public we were soldiers
    he had my back when there were troubles on my shoulders
    suddenly its over, don't want to dwell on how sudden it ends
    but it seems like just the other day we were hugging as friends
    during school he was quicker than most, and tougher than all
    and it didn't matter, the bigger they were the harder they'd fall
    nowadays, when thinking upon and at it, my laugh is automatic
    how quickly he could switch from chilling out right back to acrobatic
    damn, yeah we were kin true, did i tell you he had a twin too?
    its a spin dude, when i think of what the other has been through
    now i could shrug it off like a jacket, but i have never pretended
    it didnt shatter my heart, that he was shot while left unattended
    im sure it was exciting, they would find a shotgun like.. damn yo
    unloaded, but Chris was resourceful and he found them some ammo
    picked up a newspaper, flipped the pages i dared them to be wrong
    headlines read "A Twin Brothers Game That Went Terribly Wrong"
    define what a sin is, if started don't know if i would be able to finish
    how would i begin it?, damn if God would just give us a minute
    so i know, what happens when the gangster magic gets gory
    I'm actually sorry that i cant say this isn't a totally factual story
    so people lend me an ear, and whether you care or just skip me
    I'll just tell you that hes no longer here and yet i carry him still with me

    R.i.p Chris.. I'll always love you - Mike


    P.s Remember the saying we used to say?!

    Time after time, again and again..
    ..together forever you'll still be my friend



    A Brother Till The End

    He stuck with me, from elementary through adolescence
    each of us growing constantly wiser from each other’s presence
    my Brother, we passed blunt to mic, rhymes we’d write and recite
    with a plight to always stay real despite all of our senseless fights
    it’s easier to reminisce on hanging and chilling with my realest man
    than trying to figure out how a nigga could just take him From the fam
    and thinking we was so ready to die and leave the entire scheme
    until we realized that our dark desires wasn’t what they seemed
    I felt helpless, watching him hurt and the doctor so calm
    I was confused, his blood still drying on my tainted palms
    and when he Left, my outlook was shattered by his death
    feeling that god had committed a crime similar to theft
    how can I explain, being somewhat lonely the rest of my days
    when life continued to pass me by in a blurry and sad daze
    impossible to push through, I tried to get dropped too, left high school
    stole a radio, did two months in juvy, my mind grew
    I reconciled with him, hard not to cry at his tombstone and grave
    sat on the grass an gazed, trying to keep old and secret memories saved
    pictured him with god doing better things and leaving our hell
    knowing he looking down on me making sure i’m doing well
    and when I look back, it’s easier to process through my mind
    happy To remember our best days and abundant good times
    grateful to the lord that my brother's demise didn’t make me blind
    as I pray for my brother through every single one of my lines

    R.i.p Chris.. Your still in my heart - Sam

    P.s Remember the saying we used to say?!

    Time after time, again and again..
    ..together forever, my brother, my twin




    When times frozen a paths chosen, our minds open
    to great thoughts we once sought were now hoping
    that good day's will continue as good day's
    or fade away till i'm put in my damn grave
    i'll state the facts, we say satins six and god's seven
    faith? it's our weapon of choosing between hell or heaven
    but no man is perfect, so there's no telling which way we'll go
    but as to Chris.. i'll pray for you, and god bless your soul


    -Philly®






    True Story.. R.I.P Chris Boyd 1985 to 2001

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    Re: Time After Time

    Last edited by Philly®; June 23rd, 2007 at 09:20 PM

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    Re: Time After Time

    This was heartfelt man, I am very very sorry for your loss bro.

    The Wordplay I felt was just great dude, well thought up and placed where words needed to be placed. I like how you chose mostly mature wording like

    automatic
    acribatic
    pretended
    unattended

    reminisce
    helpless

    And other words like that. I felt your rhyme skeme and flow was well handled and most of the reasioning behind that was your wordplay. Your creaitvity with this peice was also really nice and original. Your format was nice and basic. Easy to read. Your Storytelling was very nice man and that is one of two qualities I look for when I read. The other is a nice emotion, and trust me. That was very well felt here man, nearly made me drop a tear. I know what it is like to lose someone. I've lost my grandfather and a close friend. You can't do much for it, revenge will just fuck you over. So all you can do is cry and keep those memories close. Keep on fighting and keep on writing.

    Nominated.


    Rest In Peace.

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    thx for the feedback n such man

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    Re: Time After Time

    Damn Philly that was deep. I know exactly where you been at man. I was brothers with my best friend, did everything together. Growing up together since 5 years old. In 2002 he moved back to Dallas with his mom and on June 30th he was killed on a crotch rocket drunk at a party. Hit a tree from his right shoulder to his left hip at 100mph. I couldn't think straight for months. I wrote at least 2 drops on RB about that shit. It was hard for me. This piece you just dropped damn near brought tears to my eyes relating back to my own experience. I wish that upon no one! I'm sorry for you loss man and this was a very worthy piece. FUCKING GREAT!
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    Damn Girl!

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    Re: Time After Time

    Quote Originally Posted by Domain 9 View Post
    Damn Philly that was deep. I know exactly where you been at man. I was brothers with my best friend, did everything together. Growing up together since 5 years old. In 2002 he moved back to Dallas with his mom and on June 30th he was killed on a crotch rocket drunk at a party. Hit a tree from his right shoulder to his left hip at 100mph. I couldn't think straight for months. I wrote at least 2 drops on RB about that shit. It was hard for me. This piece you just dropped damn near brought tears to my eyes relating back to my own experience. I wish that upon no one! I'm sorry for you loss man and this was a very worthy piece. FUCKING GREAT!

    yea man times be tuff i decided to open mic it since it was his birthday n actually get it some feedback, but word, leave links n i'll grab then


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    Re: Time After Time

    any other feedback?, leave links

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    Re: Time After Time

    I nominated it

    Down to collab? If so holler at me on AIM.

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    Re: Time After Time

    Oh man that was really deep.
    Sorry for that loss too man.
    I'll give a good feedback tomrorow since im bout to sleep.
    I got you man.
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