rules
unlimited bars
3-0 votes is a k.o
due today any time.......
rules
unlimited bars
3-0 votes is a k.o
due today any time.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=314042
this was ma first battle post and i fucked it up but plz click the link and id love to get some votes on this on or you can go to the first battle i posted and read it there then post yr votes in this one thanx...
sorry to have to serve you today and on a wab page ,
now imgonna take your face off and be gone in 60 seconds like nickolace cage/
in this rap shit i paid ma dues ,so dawg in battleing call me parker lewis cause i cant lose/imma short fues ready to blow like johnnie dep,i got powers like screech ill ruin your rep/as a matter of fact your whole immage is wack,
therefor people waont buy your album if it had a 40 and a blunt attached/
lyricly your not of my equal,ill put the verbal burner to ya chest wit words that'ell leave you leakin like you were on your ministral/followed by ma shells runnin through yo mental /im wildin and off the wall like the name of michael jacksons first album/
puttin hands on you like goro,wit ma iceberg obstacle ,instantanious plots ,and homicidal shots,ill knock blood outta yo snott box...
uk_sensei
Noweight
Age: 16
Status: Online
IP: 0DD2 7DAA
cousin mikey thinks hes givin me a beatin,
and you think u got fans,only fan u got is spinnin on ya ceilin,
talkin bout nicolas cage 60 seconds,
only ko u get is playin games on tekken,
ya lyrics dont hit that hard dont u reckon,
so now let quit cos u aint mastered battlin,
cos after ive finished ill leave ya liek broken glass shatterin,
battlin noobs liek u why goin past,
cos ur rhymes coudnt be sharp if u was stabbed by a pin blood splatterin fast,
cos after u my verse hits this page u will be needin a cast,
leave ya whacked like mole in the hole cos this brehs a fuckin spaz,
this is his verse
cheers for doing it mate
vote............ ..
yo can we get some votes plz id really like to know who won this battle .this is ma first battle
so id really like to know how i did so i can move on to the next battle ...thanx yall
yo your pretty good for your firts time ever defenetly beter than my first time
ayo folke could a brotha get a vote on this battle plz i see it didnt get any votes yet so i was just asking 4 a lil vote or two it would be very nice of yall
this battle is weak but uk gets it for throwin punches atleast and attempting.
Not much more to really say besides read other kats battles who is better than u guys and elevate.
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cheers for the vote apreciate it peace ..........you all..... ..............................
uppin 1
more votes
UK:
you had no real punches..your bar'z were stretched
out to the max..your disses were weak..you coulda
came a lot better..structure was definately messed up
out of everything your structure should of been set up
perfect..but you should elevate then come back pz..
Cousin:
your structure was ok..better then UK'z..punches were
better then his but still need to work on a lot of things
you keyed what you needed to though to take this battle
when it comes to it..Cousin takes it for better structure and
having more sense of battling..pz..
V/Cousin..
thanx 4 tha vote 1-1 need c aouple more votes to finish this