still in a world of choas
u get robbed if u floss too hard/
i had this from the start
i smell blood like a shark
u aint got the heart
no wonder u workin for da narks/
im tryn to conceal my anger
neva do business wit a stranger
y'all wanna bet show me da wgaer
i cut u up wit a buck50 razor
my word s will leave u bleedin , stigmata
gettin rushed to da hospital , trauma
all over sum bullshyt drama
Na im not feeling this man
before you write another OM you should read some from other people to get an idea of what is expected...
i wasnt feelin this too much at all....this way too short...and it was basically pojntless....the topic wasnt cool..rhymes were too simple...and dude....this was not good....elevate is all i have to say..peace
I was hoping it was about Charlie Murphy.
A short, self-glory piece. You had outer multis and some basic wordplay. Keep writing and elevate.
Closed. read the rules.
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