same rules nigga. ill drop 25 minutes after i see you dropped your verse
Lyricwordsman
-= | Yukmouth | =-
same rules nigga. ill drop 25 minutes after i see you dropped your verse
Whoah!
ya rhymes is wack get back wit that weak crap/
i done herd betta rhymes frome the cat in the hat/
ya cant spit shit against my chronical scrips/
so you read this and feed off the shit i spit/
dont step up bitch nigga stay in ya trayla/
i fucked ya mom i'll send the bitch a tip latta/
i got you in check and i select ya weak intelect/
and i suspect ya rhymes is wrecked show ya masta respect/
he sucks dick quick he dont miss a lick/
he eat pussy wit this rubbin his face in that shit/
gay ass faggot dont take this rout/
the way u suck dick can prove you're yuk mouth/
Merk.
Crack yo back in half leave you bleeding down yo path
You could be the flame on a candle.........................
.............................still wouldnt be on top of "wacks"
Raps is less then best watch my text sink in yo chest
Only time ya spit hot when yo breath hot of the press
Brace mace to rearrange your face get lucky with charms
Kuz L couldnt drop punches on me with Tyson in his arms
Here my blits of hits leavin you more crippled than crips
Kuz this nigga faker than a sports bra on Double D tits
Implie lyrical high you aint elevating foo ill rip you loose
Kuz like your name your gettn an "L'' before a "W''*
*his name..."L"yrical"W"ordsman
Blat Blat Luniz!
Whoah!
this battle was god but my vote goes to yukmouth.He came hard with his punches and personals in his verse which I really liked.Also I really liked the structure and the wordplay that youkmouth had in his verse too.The other guy had good punches and personals in his verse but they didn't hit that hard to win this.Also your structure was ok but get rid of those / marks makes you look like a noob.But overall this battle was ok but yukmouth gets my vote
vote yukmouth
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lyric - hardly any punches. good structure. ok flow. you need to get more punches in, use better wordplay and more complex vocab too.
yuk - more punches than he had, good ones too. good flow good structure. use more complex vocab tho.
v/yuk - harder punches and better flow.
this battle was god but my vote goes to yukmouth.He came hard with his punches and personals in his verse which I really liked.Also I really liked the structure and the wordplay that youkmouth had in his verse too.The other guy had good punches and personals in his verse but they didn't hit that hard to win this.Also your structure was ok but get rid of those / marks makes you look like a noob.But overall this battle was ok but yukmouth gets my vote
vote yukmouth
^AGREE
this battle was god but my vote goes to yukmouth.He came hard with his punches and personals in his verse which I really liked.Also I really liked the structure and the wordplay that youkmouth had in his verse too.The other guy had good punches and personals in his verse but they didn't hit that hard to win this.Also your structure was ok but get rid of those / marks makes you look like a noob.But overall this battle was ok but yukmouth gets my vote
vote yukmouth
^AGREE Psuedo is my alias
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=224213 will ya hit this up honestly
v-Yuk
Came harder with punches and an overall dope ass verse, had personals, flow, multies, structure everything was perfect in this verse, other guy was straight nothing too good. not really any punches except one weak one,
overall
Yukmouth-9.9/10
LyricWordsman-3/10
ya rhymes is wack get back wit that weak crap/
i done herd betta rhymes frome the cat in the hat/
ya cant spit shit against my chronical scrips/
so you read this and feed off the shit i spit/
dont step up bitch nigga stay in ya trayla/
i fucked ya mom i'll send the bitch a tip latta/
i got you in check and i select ya weak intelect/
and i suspect ya rhymes is wrecked show ya masta respect/
he sucks dick quick he dont miss a lick/
he eat pussy wit this rubbin his face in that shit/
gay ass faggot dont take this rout/
the way u suck dick can prove you're yuk mouth/
Vs.
Crack yo back in half leave you bleeding down yo path
You could be the flame on a candle.........................
.............................still wouldnt be on top of "wacks"
Raps is less then best watch my text sink in yo chest
Only time ya spit hot when yo breath hot of the press
Brace mace to rearrange your face get lucky with charms
Kuz L couldnt drop punches on me with Tyson in his arms
Here my blits of hits leavin you more crippled than crips
Kuz this nigga faker than a sports bra on Double D tits
Implie lyrical high you aint elevating foo ill rip you loose
Kuz like your name your gettn an "L'' before a "W''*
Vote:Yuk for better punches and coming way harder trufly stop battling no-weights homie lol anyhow L u need to elevate with better punches n shit u got ok personals but just make them harder ight then ~1~
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