thnx for the votes......keep'em comin......
thnx for the votes......keep'em comin......
Ok battle wasn’t feeling ya verse from either sides that
Strong but you both were evenly matched your personals
Weren’t that good punches I was feeling the same from both
Sides I just say work on come n at ur opponent more but
Other wise you both were aight so ima have to vote for
Vote/Cr
Only by the string of a hair no hate
Don’t retaliate if I didn’t vote for you and go
Hate vote on me like the rest of these herbs good
Battle peace
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R.B is full of fucking herbs
and Noobs stick to one fucking name
and build ya shit up
not 10 alias i hate to see a good forum
go bad cause of dumb fucks
play ya cards go against all odds
shoot for the moon and if u miss
u still above those stars
can u guyz hit up da battle against Kamp Boy on da 1st page of da FL
Uppin...........................lets go........
Well its a clear winner. Cronik.... had nicer but stretched lines. But his punches I did like since they were direct and hits. Unlike The Reason who resorted to using punches that were rather watered down for some one on Cronik's level. Still good battle since usually they totally suck ass... and I can't bother reading em if they are too boring. For now my vote goes to Cronik
any feed appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=219886
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Flow:Tie
Punches:CR
Personals:CR
Wordplay:CR
Creavity:CR
CR-HAD good punches and personals and an balanced flow and good worplay his verse rating is 8.1
tHA Reason: Good Flow bad strcurure bad punches no personals to me simple verse overall verse rating 5.9
MY V/CR for better FLOW,PUNCHES.WORDPLAY his punches hit harder to
thnx keep em flowin.......
yo i gotta say you both did a nice ass job. cronik i like your verse but i didnt get sum of it i like your punches but you have to hit um harder and your structure was good. but ya word play was iight im not saying they good or bad im jus saying they iight thatz it just iight.
tha reason i like ya verse your word play was good and your structure was good 2 and i like how you used ya punches hitting him were it hurts so no hate but.
my vote goes to tha reason.
Wtf It Should Be 5-1 But Its 1-1??????????????????
man i should have done won this......uppin.....
Cronik:Stretched lines,some big some short.....Flow was off at times but i understood it alot......Rhymes were good,everything made sence.....Vocab. Was ok....You coulda had better but i guess for dis battle against dis guy no.......overall.....8/10
Tha reason:Read what i i had to say to cronik............Thats also for you,except that you had a lil of it,and not much....Work on your punches though,not hard enuff.......Overall..........7/10
Vote honestly on dis..........
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=223695
alright yo Cronik the was nice ass verse you drop your punches hit hard you had nice personals wordplay went well with the creativity you put on it everything work together on thing was your structure you didn't have to space in between bars but good job anyway and Tha Reason your flow was nice and creativity was pretty cool to but the wordplay was ok and your punches and personals did hit him that hard you came of looking like you wanted to get nice vocab in there and it messed up the punches try to get that worked out and it would have beeen better
breakdown
flow-Cronik
structure-Tha Reason
punches-Cronik
personals-Cronik
creativity-both
wordplay-Cronik
nice battle from both of you they where both pretty good but Cronik was alittle better and because of that Cronik take this
v/Cronik
Master Of Illusion
Intractional Actions
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u couldn't "cook" your Rymes if u was a top notch Text Baker
and Da closest Time u've been 2 "def" was chillin' wit an 'taker (Undertaker)
i dont get it???
U couldn't drop 10's if u was playin' and threw Dimes
U wanted 2 see a loss so I Gave u Ur own Rhymes
WTF
These people couldn't stand so they didn't listen and they joked u (joke on him)
And "Tha Reason" u was named cronik was cuz everbody smoked u
pretty good
I seen way better battles and yours wasn't so Fine
cuz i practicaully beat u badly after my first Line
OK
So i close battles like books u close like bad shit
so take advice from ur title and bitch just do it
attempted personal that didnt hit
{VS}
Nigga don't u know ill merk anyone to show i got skill-z
.....Cause if there was rap police they'd arrest my verse cause this is proof it kill-z
wateva floatz ur boat
Coming at me?, boy u betta have a "Reason"
.....cause the heat that u spit is shit cause instead u be freezin (stalling)
pretty good
Boy u betta step back, cause i pack a stack of herbs like you everyday
.....Lost two battles cause bitches like u report i sway
nyce
But in ur case with them off "key" lines (keyboard)
.....U should be written a ticket to see these bar's cause i charge "Fines"
(like hes charged to see my shit)
WTF
I wanted somebody with a little reputation
.....Not a herb that i murd-er in any speculation
that shytz infuago
So i dont know why i accept'd ur offer or even let u peep me...
.....but it's all good, nickname me reaper cause i put u six feet deep, c?
bad closer
vote/Cronik +Good wordplay PERSONALS AND PUNCHES
v-Cronik
came harder with punches and personals and his flow was better, aswell was his structure. the reason just came too wack in this one, woith either played punches or no punches at all at each bar.
v-Cronik
Overall-
Cronik-6/10
Reason-3/10
Word^
alright yo Cronik the was nice ass verse you drop your punches hit hard you had nice personals wordplay went well with the creativity you put on it everything work together on thing was your structure you didn't have to space in between bars but good job anyway and Tha Reason your flow was nice and creativity was pretty cool to but the wordplay was ok and your punches and personals did hit him that hard you came of looking like you wanted to get nice vocab in there and it messed up the punches try to get that worked out and it would have beeen better
breakdown
flow-Cronik
structure-Tha Reason
punches-Cronik
personals-Cronik
creativity-both
wordplay-Cronik
nice battle from both of you they where both pretty good but Cronik was alittle better and because of that Cronik take this
v/Cronik