this is a piece my friend did...she's a helluva writer but embarassed to post for people...so she asked me to post for her...please welcome her with dope critiques and responses...its a nice quick key by her
Loves demise has come to my surprise
And shifted into two directions of lies
My soul, the one I wanted to marry
Is no longer there, im no longer carried
Into a blissful place of dreams and love
All has vanished, nothing left thereof
A masked man only existing in dreams
Is taking part of me, drifting in streams
I try to swim back but the current is strong
my strength is weak and fidelity is gone
Ive swam too deep and am trapped deep under
Tapped the root of a dream and made reality thunder
Ironic to say, I didn't want my dream to come true
All I really wanted was to forever be with you
Not just by your side every day of my life
But for you to look at me, want me as your wife
When I look in your eyes, I wish they were warm
I wanna make you feel as if your soul was reborn
Make love to me with passion and not lust
Get lost in our paradise, nobody but us
Shits so hard to explain, im far from the right words
Theres just something missing, like there is in this verse