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    The River Of Life

    The River Of Life

    The river flows on as people watch it drift away
    Droplets of water as a symbol of everlasting faith
    Fate? No. We choose how our life is played
    But we use what is given to us

    Nature blesses minds that are weak
    The river is a place of good
    Yet it is such a waste, that river I see
    Killing lives so innocently

    The river meets a problem
    And divides into two ways
    Friend split up, will they meat again?
    Life can have its ways of hatred.

    Sun gleams of the mourning river
    It passes by so peacefully
    Without a sound…
    Muted with grace and tranquility

    Imagery surpasses words
    As the river disperses feelings
    Emotions are forgotten
    As the river continues to flow

    The river seems to get thinner
    Weakening slowly…
    To an unknown death
    What will happen next?

    Despaired moments in a flowing legacy of history
    The water has deceased…
    As it goes over the waterfall,
    All things known are gone
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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    Please give some replies on this. Don't judge this piece by its rhyming structure. It is a free emotional piece. I made it not rhyme. I tried to focus more on explaining life as a river, rather than to make words fit. It helps me get the emotion out more not worrying about the words that go down. Hope you like this different piece. Uppin.
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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    Blah...to da tizzop.
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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