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Thread: I Would Rather See You Dance

  1. #1
    Ill..
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    I Would Rather See You Dance

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    I Would Rather See You Dance
    Written By Ill..



    I would rather see you dance
    for nickels on the subway platform
    than fly that blind furrow down
    a blood-red radar field carrying seeds of fire

    (Lights on the instrument panel say
    NOW which in the relativity
    of motion means HERE, and you
    close the lever that releases the bombs
    while below . . .)

    Cousin,
    you have told me how you leap
    to a perfect stillness in yourself
    when you go dancing, how you feel
    the constellations wheel about your breathing

    (Lights below in the darkness
    blink out at the rumor of your approach,
    families crowd into the shelters
    while the village sentries watch the stars
    for a shadow . . ).

    Cousin,
    I would rather see you dance
    around your old army cap on the corner
    than fly that dark trajectory down
    the valley of your own shadow, reaping fire

    (Bombs fly their almost predictable curve,
    strapped in your cockpit you fall with them,
    watching as the computer tracks your success
    you plunge to earth already miles behind the fire
    of your jets . . .)

    Cousin,
    you can fly from the toes of your old
    sneakers if you close your eyes and fall
    into that perfect darkness inside
    where the blood and breath circulate and return

    (Buildings bloom behind you and collapse,
    blood and breath escape their vessels,
    your thunder silences the mouths of the survivors
    and the village burns like a signal fire
    signifying darkness . . .)

    Cousin,
    I would rather see you dance
    for drinks in some subterranean bar
    than fly that tunnel of sky between stars
    and the scattered constellations of your
    unknown cousins

    I would rather see you dance


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  2. #2
    Ill..
    Guest
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  3. #3
    Genocide21
    Guest
    yo this is a very interesting verse...hope that the army men in Iraq also take care of themselves...this was heart hitting...it hit me hard and i always pray for the many men in war...good verse.....tight

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=128049
    check mines

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