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  1. January 10th, 2012, 07:05 PM #1
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    Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    Wattup everyone. This is another one of my freeverse type shit. I honestly think this is one of my better pieces. I doubt I'm really gonna release a lot more audios as of now. I kind of wanna wait until I get better quality, better equipment and all that stuff. It'll be appreciated if you guys judge my rapping ability and flow, delivery, all that instead of the quality, because As you can see, its not the best. Thanks



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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    this was a dope free verse man, ya the quality could be a little better but still you went in, the lyrics were good, flow was on point throughout. i dig your voice too very unique which is a big bonus. i was vibin the beat too gave me an old school feel and jamming to it i love these tunes. overall dope drop man keep them coming you got lots of potential
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    yeah jcole killed this beat....sound like you got an accent...british?

    flow ain't too bad a bit heard a few stumbles here and there but overall not too bad, watch that pronucation at times got jumbled up a little bit with the flow....but yeah this flow is pretty strong man good breath control too delivery wasn't bad either

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  4. January 11th, 2012, 01:34 PM #4
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    work wid lyrics and wid flow
    in my opinion u should find da studio)
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  5. January 11th, 2012, 06:06 PM #5
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    I feel you guys. Appreciate the comments and feed
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    this wasnt bad at all homie was creative i lliked the contet just work on the delivery and flow other than that you are heading in the right direction
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    The delivery could be smoother it could be the recordinBut I liked the cadence of your flow 1st verse was definatly better than the 2nd where you seem to go off rhythmn

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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    Yo rtf man
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    You got a unique voice..sounds good. Flow is on and off at times..it'll come though. Haven't seen a remix to this before so it was good.

    Once you get that high quality equipment you'll notice how much more it picks up and what your weaknesses are. Just be more natural with the flow IMO. But yeah, overall this was cool. Keep it up, man. 1
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    listenin..the beats pretty dope. kinda simple and plain but it fits the track. the quality isnt bad, nothin spectacular, but in time. the flow is on point for the most part, it seems like your rapping really high pitched. try bringing it down making it more natural and see what ya get. delivery is on point, you got the confidence just nail down the flow and structure a bit and itll be real dope. keep it up man.

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  12. January 31st, 2012, 07:10 PM #12
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    dope flow homie
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  14. February 1st, 2012, 03:39 AM #14
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    im likin the vocab. And your multis in each line, flow COULD use work, so you can stay on beat, other then that, emotions are there. good stuff

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  15. February 2nd, 2012, 12:49 AM #15
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    Re: Royal Flush (Freeverse) RTF

    Not my style of rap but this shit is pretty ill
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