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  1. December 20th, 2011, 04:48 AM #1
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    Arrow Fading Away (w/Hook)

    Sat down today, started workin away and this is what I got.
    I'm pretty happy with the outcome of this one. Give it a listen and lemme know what you guys think. Instrumental of the month! lol

    This instrumental was sampled from:

    Artist: Ugress
    Song: The Beauty Never Lasts

    -The hooks lyrics are as follows-

    "Be quiet dive in the moment
    Blue faced disguise
    Searching her eyes
    Fighting like a
    Night on a clear day
    Floating away fading away"

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  2. December 20th, 2011, 11:14 AM #2
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    i love this, got a painful/realness vibe to it
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  3. December 21st, 2011, 04:18 AM #3
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    somebody could write to this talking about their life.. almost a triumph type beat.

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  4. December 21st, 2011, 08:29 PM #4
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    really like inspirational type beat with a good vybe just spittin the truth or something
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  5. December 26th, 2011, 04:00 PM #5
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    bump, Lets get some more comments peeps!
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  6. December 26th, 2011, 06:16 PM #6
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    hot beat, got a really nice vibe to it. Deep emotion requires strong lyricism and deep delivery. very hot.
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  7. December 27th, 2011, 10:10 PM #7
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    This is ill. Chorus fits the beat most definitely. Im diggin this track man, the sample is very well executed. Good job man, and if you dont mind RTF:http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...779/index.html
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  8. December 28th, 2011, 01:36 PM #8
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    Loved this mate.

    I could tell from the intro it would be good. Nice and clear, boom bap soulful style at its best. If I would change one thing, then I guess it would be the snare it just kind of snapped.

    Sorry, I'm not the best at explaining things. No hate though, I really enjoyed hearing it. The bass, kicks, everything was so sublime.

    9/10

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  9. December 31st, 2011, 10:11 AM #9
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    Great vibe for those real poetic artists, def. like the vibe on this one, did its job really. good ish man. keep it up.

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  10. December 31st, 2011, 12:16 PM #10
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    Nice emotional beat, the sample was great. I wish the sample (vocals) was a little louder tho... Since it's a sample, you might not have full control on it in the mix, but maybe the drums could be lowered a little then (especially the snare). Anyways, great work, keep it up!
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  11. December 31st, 2011, 07:36 PM #11
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    Re: Fading Away (w/Hook)

    @Atomic - Yea I really dont have much control of the vocal sample on this, the best I could do is filter out a double take on it, but even then it really messes with the overall mix.
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