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Wanted to take a moment to drop off a new track that we just finished today. Tracks concept is about break ups so I am sure we all have a story to tell there!!!
1st Verse-- Longway
2nd Verse -- Lost Angel
3rd Verse -- Joshua Smyth
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Not feeling the sample on this at all. Beats alright, definitely captures the mood of the song. One thing I notice right away is an improvement on the vocal quality would really make something like this a lot better. Flow is alright, not bad on riding the beat. Not really my style but I respect the effort, keep doing your thing man.
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Singer is dope, great for the chorus. Not sure if its one of the premade beats but its cool. 1st verse - Delivery was decent, emotion could be upped especially for a song with such deep concept. Lyrics were okay, did what u needed with it. 2nd - Delivery was pretty good with this one, i liked the singing mixed in with it. Flow was dope as well, found myself nodding my head in parts. Lyrics were pretty basic again but it was alright overall. 3rd - Delivery was cool, another singing verse and it works pretty well. I feel like maybe you need to up the vocals a tad cuz its slightly hard to make out the words and i was straining to hear. Flow was nice throughout. Lyrics were generic break up, decent though. I thought overall the song was pretty good, i really liked the singing/flowing. The lyrics could be better all around, just that so many songs have been done about this topic so you have to come at it from a different angle or it gets sort of lost in the mix. Keep it up though
Chorus is ok it's that new style like the skyler gray type of track
Verse is very basic cadence doesn't ride the beat very well could be smoother. Vocals could be mixed louder especially with lower tones in your voice
Verse 2 Lost Angel has allot of ability he needs to work on the beat riding about and needs to record with a good engineer that can mixdown his punches he got that Nelly Bone Thugs melody rapping which can be good
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Smyth is the best of the 3 has the smoothest tone and flow on the beat could be clearer on the tone or how its mixed down but great verse
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hitting u back....this hook ain't bad...guessing it came with the beat? 1st dude def needs a bit more emotion/swag delivery is also a bit stiff flow is decent....2nd dude has more swag liking the singing dubs really compliments the rapping....def feeling this verse riding beat nice....3rd dude quality could be upped....delivery is pretty cool with that half singing rapping
overall not a bad track felt the 2nd and 3rd verses the most...keep it up man
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ight, the beat is a really nice find man. The chorus and the singing was a perfect match for it. I like the second and third verses better than the first, in all honestly. I think the third one though can add more emotion to his voice, because the flow was most definetly there. I love the concept because its some shit everyone can relate too, which is always good. Keep at it. Check me out as well.
this is dope sounds like an atomicbeats production...
i like this approach on beats at the mo sorta thing u wanna hear now n then when ya feeling blue...
the engineering is fine maybe a little more work on the mid levels if to be picky but im not sure what deathchamberz is on lol ..
verses all come in strong i lke josh's verse to most was not what i was expecting !!!
dope concept nice beat nice approach Happy new yrs FFN
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i absolutely love the hook..
i feel like this could have mixed better to match the quality of the hook.
the verses were pretty good though.
and i really liked the concept.. keep it up
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