Notebook Murda

[Fresh Air]

Probably the most simple track I've made. But I didn't want
to add anything more and end up ruining it. I'm thinking
about adding just a sample of a female vocal, well see. Feed
appreciated.




[sc]http://soundcloud.com/cbreezy-2/notebook-murda[/sc]


Feed:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/NewhiT-

459226/index.html

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre.../under-stress-

458934/index.html

[DJ Breeze]

I like the New School electro shit mixed with an old school vibe. It's an interesting sounding track. I don't really know what needed improvement, since this isn't my type of track. But I like how it has that loop, and then some other layers of that. It seems kind of uneasy, and if that's what you were going for, good job. It sounds scary. Not menacing, but creepy and uneasy. But it's dope. Good job. I really like your beats, so keep it up.

[Fresh Air]

I like the New School electro shit mixed with an old school vibe. It's an interesting sounding track. I don't really know what needed improvement, since this isn't my type of track. But I like how it has that loop, and then some other layers of that. It seems kind of uneasy, and if that's what you were going for, good job. It sounds scary. Not menacing, but creepy and uneasy. But it's dope. Good job. I really like your beats, so keep it up.

appreciate it fam....tbh, i made this using only the macbook pro keyboard in logic while my boy was working on another track with the midi keyboard... thats why its so simple...but i appreciate the feed my g

[DJ Breeze]

appreciate it fam....tbh, i made this using only the macbook pro keyboard in logic while my boy was working on another track with the midi keyboard... thats why its so simple...but i appreciate the feed my g

I understand that. And no problem.

[J-min]

i like it but it is pretty simple i fele more can be done with it homie!!!!


rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...22#post8340822

[Edison Av]

didn't wanna say simple in this feedback...but this was kinda bordering on the bad kind of simple in my opinion...it sounds like it was made on a synthesizer, and this isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it isn't MY thing...the feel just isn't organic enough. to be honest it sounds good, and it would fit a video game soundtrack well in my opinion, and i don't mean that in a bad way, because this beat is very rap-to-able at the same time.

that being said, with the right vocalists and the right hooks, this could be really hot. it had a certain feel/vibe to it, and if that same feel was met with a vocalist willing to build with it, it could be really dope.

a good drop dude, stay up

[Fatal.]

Simple, but yet interesting. I like it bro. ddefinately feel like you could do more with it,but i like the vybe though. hope to see more from you man.

[Andrewert]

Meh very mellow, gets repetive/boring, this is more like something like drake or someone with that could be voiced to. I mean there is nothing that makes you have a happy vibe, like this sounds more like a horrocore beat type of thing maybe a freestyle, but it gets boring, and like you said it is pretty simple.