Okay so To some of you this maybe the most corniest Open Mic piece you've ever read, but I put some thoughts into this...
Picture a game show, like an interview, where the host talks about the every step of my life, and me the person being interviewed...
(Paragraphs in italicized font is words spoken by the game show host, un-italicized font is my response)
Welcome to the Show! Today we look at Jeffry’s life and how he is pathetic,
We’ll embarrass him and make sure that this is something he won’t forget,
Lets start from the Beginning,
Jeff…you were born in Detroit, then moved when you were 5,
Were the streets too tough for you to stay alive?
You were the Bully, teachers had your parents for conferences for your behavior,
When they’d leave, the teachers yelled, we hope never to see you later,
How’d that make you feel being such an asshole to your classmates being corrupt?
Things seemed to get better when you moved - so you thought.
First off, I wasn’t a bully, I had to stand my ground and it wasn’t easy,
I didn’t care if I made any friends in kindergarten, I didn’t care if people pleased me,
I was 5, like I was mature enough to realize that? No, didn’t think so,
Stretched my teachers patience, like I stretched their over-looking wrinkles,
Moving wasn’t easy, It took a toll on me, losing the city that I knew,
How would it make you feel, if all the teachers despised you?
Now Jeff, I see you are getting a little emotional, no need for that here,
Grew up in Milwaukee, hung around the wrong people, how’d that make you feel?
Barely got into middle school with that aweful GPA,
You got into so much trouble how’d that make you feel standing in front of the schools PTA?
Haha we all mistakes Jeff, that’s obvious to see, but you are a joke, pathetic loser
Middle school is where people set apart from the pack, but you hung around emos and drug abusers
Wait just a minute there, takin open shots at me,
If I’m being judged, you are the enemy,
GPA? I did just fine, thanks you for your input though.
Yes, we all make mistakes, my heart is big, but your makin it cold,
Drug abusers? I knew them sinced I moved from Michigan to Wisconsin,
State the facts right, do you even know what these words you say as you keep talkin?
Well Done Jeff, you defend yourself well.
Like the way you did with your boy, Terrance, but he’s sitting behind a prison cell,
Yes you remember it don’t you? He robbed a convenience store, and you were the spotter,
You couldn’t work your way out of it with the police, like failed magic from harry potter,
Or when Terrance’s mom died, where were you at his moms funeral? Nowhere to be found,
You lost his trust, and hes fallen to the ground
Terrance was my guy we both made it through high school together,
We were Kobe and Shaq, we thought we would make it forever,
When Times got hard, we would find away out,
Broken dreams couldn’t separate us apart,
Terrance went through a tough stretch - I’ll give you that, but don’t twist it,
Every Saturday I go see Terrence and make sure its him I visit.
Well Jeff, its good to see you can defend your friends, but what about Amanda?
You told her after sophomore year to go play in traffic, when she moved to Atlanta,
For being a honest guy, that’s some really harsh words,
Bet she didn’t like being on the opposite side of that text when she read it for sure,
Amanda was a traitor and you know that’s true, she used to be my girl
She was a hoe, a bitch and I couldn’t stand the site of her,
It was her that I truly despised,
I couldn’t stand the look of her overwelling fake eyes,
How about erica? Me and her talk to this day, bet you forgot that
Amanda was what erica is not, a true friend, a personal outlet,
High school was rough ill give you that much,
I never took the easy way out of life, never took a short cut.
You can sit here and tell me all my faults ive had throughout my entire life,
I maybe not perfect, but im as good as I am in my sight,
After high school I moved to Memphis, to go to college, that’s where im at to this day,
I try to do the best I can, no matter what people say,
I’m just another person that lives on this planet,
Obviously this isn’t the life that I thought it would be, but I didn’t plan it,
Im making the best of it, the best that I can,
Beat me all you want, this is the life but I know you can’t understand..
Feedback is appreciated.
Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=452032
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=452019
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=452036