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This is basically the product of me and my band recorded live in several takes. The producer / engineer we were working with took what he thought were the best segments of each take and compiled them, then added a few overdubs. Tell me what you think.
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this sounds a lot like some atmosphere stuff here homey...digging the beat...the flows on point and kinda trips over the beat occasionally but it sounds good...the jazz horns are sick as fuck...loving the groove on this man...more drops like this!
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not sure about the voice seems a bit blahh, sounds abit empty, instrumental was good, good content
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sounds like spoken word..dat back beat is good... ima play it a few more times to grasp the concept u talkin bout
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This is definitely different man. I'm diggin it. I love the whole vibe from it. Definitely a good look man. All the instruments and vocals and everything sound good to me to be honest. They all help set the mood of this track. Good job man!
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this was pretty good.. smooth - flow was cool - story was on point
not my average thing to listen to but you definitely did your thing on with this track as for finding a style that fits you
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This is deff some story/philisophical shit, not many ppl attempt this so props for that. Vocal quality could deff use work, but the flow is pretty dope even for a slow beat, sometimes those can be the hardest. I'm actually really feeling the jazzy second part of the instrumental, riding the beat well. Good drop man, just work on that vocal quality. Dope shit
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yo hitting u back sorry for the delay been busy....your voice is different...cool flow tho....some story telling stuff like it....i like your delivery actually its differnet but it stands out not generic thats good lol....so you guys played all this stuff in hte background...this is dope man if u did...i like this
keep dropping i like this stuff!
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this reminds me of system of a down live instruments slight reverb on a story telling track.
i would of liked to hear like harmonic change ups in there but non the less i still enjoyed it ... was very different,,
the beat was dope was a mix inbetween old school hiphop and new school rock
props on this drop man.....
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This was one of the better songs I've heard here. Lyrics sound like something you would rap to a fast beat but you used it on a slow beat. Flow was smooth all throughout the song.
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Loving the real instruments sounds fucking sick.
Delivery was kind of different, flow was on kind of off sometimes but it sounded smooth.
Loving the beat though. Sick shit.
Keep it up man.
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gotta give you props for trying something different and Im loving the beat. Your flow is pretty good there were only a few parts where some of the words really didn't fit on the beat but overall this is a pretty dope song
The voice was not really loving might be how it's recorded
I liked the flow on it was very different
The Beat was cool with a nice grove different tip still from typical hiphop rap.
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