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    6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    Did this up in my study at school the other day, tell me what you think

    Here's the instrumental to the song: [MUSIC="http://www.youtube.com/user/l2aid#p/u/11/ronCmqJ3ARM"]

    Tell me what you think, just messin around with Wayne's beat

    On behalf of the empty glass,
    We have Enrique Iglesias,
    Fuckin all these bitches
    like a week in Las vegas
    Thinkin its fuckin New York,
    There’s nothing he cannot do,
    So what he not fuckin perfect,
    That’s what pink will tell you,
    G6 and rocket hear ‘em comin in for landing
    Don’t hold it against brittney she just likes a companion,

    Kit kat be back take a little break right now,
    Cuz I don’t wannna sound like weezy man I’m goin for that fresh sound

    And now the base is back like Eminem the game,
    Yall are unbecoming monsters goin’ for the fame,
    Usher this lady out please man, oh my god,
    The crowds are goin’ "goo-goo" but her outfits outlawed,
    Meat dress blue lipstick this is goin’ on a broad…
    Fuckin life cuz she a bitch an nothin more,
    3oh!3 I’ve heard this 1 2 many times B 4,
    Speakin of ham kan ya do some breakfast n’ bed?
    Don’t be surprised at my lyrics,
    These are words I should have said

    This a short verse no more than 4 or 5 seconds,
    Eatin this beat up and now I’m hear for my seconds


    That's all I've got so far... I know there are some awkward spots I'm still working on like "Enrique whatever his name is" and "bitch and nothing more" which goes against "broad" with my rhyme scheme but tell me what you think about the rest


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    Last edited by Del; February 20th, 2011 at 02:53 PM

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    Re: 6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    Haha Word up Weezy Over the Hill Yo, U wrapped that shit up tight, real MC's reign supreme...

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    Re: 6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    thanks bro, Lovin the feedback
    Last edited by Del; February 20th, 2011 at 02:53 PM

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    Re: 6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    And now the base is back like Eminem the game,
    Yall are unbecoming monsters goin’ for the fame,
    Usher this lady out please man, oh my god,
    The crowds are goin’ "goo-goo" but her outfits outlawed,
    Meat dress blue lipstick this is goin’ on a broad…
    Fuckin life cuz she a bitch an nothin more,
    3oh!3 I’ve heard this 1 2 many times B 4,

    Best section of your little thing here

    I would review more but tht instrumental is actually driving me crazy :P
    Keep it up

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    Re: 6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    Kit kat be back take a little break right now,
    Cuz I don’t wannna sound like weezy man I’m goin for that fresh sound

    ^^ haha, great lines man. those two had the best flow aswell. the whole things pretty decent to be honest, worth continuing with. btw, liking the amount of artists mentioned in there.

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    Re: 6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    shit was dope yeah you had some rough spots but it happens
    nice structure n flow and vocab def feelin this piece.

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    Re: 6 Foot 7 Foot Remix

    need one more link...closed

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