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  1. October 13th, 2010, 04:29 AM #1
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    Life of Struggle

    Track from the IRBC week 1. Just looking for some feedback.

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  2. October 14th, 2010, 01:51 AM #2
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    Re: Life of Struggle

    Im not really feelin the beat slash chorus too much, and the flow was a lil all over the place in the beginning but around 2:45 to 3:15 you switched up your flow and started sounding really nice, so just find ur rhythm and get comfortable with the beat and you'll be str8
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    Re: Life of Struggle

    9DM from GTN i had to put that, i'll edit with feed in a bit.
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  4. October 14th, 2010, 01:41 PM #4
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    Re: Life of Struggle

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