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    spit for rank

    wat up new to this site so, i really dnt know were to introduce myself at or were u text for rank at so ima drop something in here to get ranked, thats even if yall rank ppl, but anyway feed back either positive or negative is appreciated.

    Project's Angle

    Im stereotipically insained and outta my membrane
    Bread to slang cocain and to feel no pain
    Talk about the dope game and wear flashy thangs
    Not go to school, and drop out after the 9th grade
    I disrespect women, callin em hoes and bitches
    Dnt trust the police, and to murder and rape snitches
    Pull pistols out, livet, cock and bust with slight decesion
    Bottles crakin, over dey head, so now they need stiches
    Uneduacated i dimistrated, with my words, im pressed
    No route navigated, but i try to do my best
    Real, gangsta's dnt walk around with teflon vests
    Cause they life span is short, takin 2 to the chest
    Tattooed out the ass, reppin city and hood
    Outsiders say im thugish, and im doin no good
    I make my projects proud, raise ur head like u should
    Most talented, and intellegent, if only they could
    Judging me is a mistake, from beginning to end
    Didint drop out, get arested, but i lost some friends
    Now im sittin at the top, lookin dwn on them
    This is are time projects, so let our story begin

    please give feed back
    thanx

  2. #2
    Pat Blynd's Avatar
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    Re: spit for rank

    Nice first drop man. Very good flow imo, and I like the ending where it turns out your not fronting like your a gangster. I thought the first 2 lines were really tight, but the third one was stretched to me. I liked the rest of it, and definitely can't wait to read some more of this.

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    Re: spit for rank

    A lot of played content, the whole hoes guns things only works well with other new concepts..esp wordplay

    e.g ..I burn cee's, It's your turn b..Raise it a degree or two..
    Strapped wit gats, blaze your corpse till it become ashes like pikachu..

    Stay up..

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