Back to reality...Nail in the coffin..R.I.P Mariah

[The Incredible Hulk]

Beat:- 'i remember' - eminem diss to everlast

*sung

*ohhhh aint it funny how things can changeeeeee
*now you realise you tried to punch out of your ranngeeeeeee
*even the pussy riders you have werent to blameeeee
*its coz you tried to act tough out of the real life you cant sustainnnnnnn
*so when theres nowhere to turn,this is where you came
*a life of modem love and aim conversations to heal your painnnnn

with all the lies she lives,this girl cant be serious
you must remember the fear of your first period?
see your diarys empty,you want to flip it aight?
coz now its like i diss you and you diss me right?
i would say this bitch is tight,but in a true world
i dont wanna be fucking around with no kiddy school girl
but i aint the fool who stepped up and got shot away
back in the 08 you were good but nah not today,
fly away,escape after i murked your first yap
this a mans game,we dont wanna hear a bird rap,
and on the real facts the other week i heard it that
brandon broke his connection so you hurt him back
word to that,refuse his eyes to see where his cam aint bin to yet
but it must hurt loving someone so bad over the internet,
with your little skinny neck,you moved onto singing yet?
mariah 'we belong together',when i fuck you i guess nick is next
tryin' to hold your head up,after you tried to sting a vet
waiting for a call off brandon,is your phone ringing yet?.....
ring ring...ring ring...

*ohhhh aint it funny how things can changeeeeee
*now you realise you tried to punch out of your ranngeeeeeee
*even the pussy riders you have werent to blameeeee
*its coz you tried to act tough out of the real life you cant sustainnnnnnn
*so when theres nowhere to turn,this is where you came
*a life of modem love and aim conversations to heal your painnnnn

we coulda been friends,but now i guess not
you chose the road of cyber love,instead of sex pot
and if heat gets hot and wants to hit you in your best spot
he remembers time is a killer,until he see's your breasts pop
but let us stop for a minute,coz i started thinkin
how you wanna be a cool kid,partyin' and drinkin
now i'm wondering what input your part is bringing
probably dwelling on brandons nuts and how hard they're swinging
eat my heart out bitch,and face it
brandon never gonna see your pussy to taste it
its wasted,find a new hobbie and try to replace it
coz i'm sure another member will come along and take it
just dont be mad,over every note you passed
look to a life of real relationships & not a modem past
and if you fall in love i hope it lasts
coz when i'm 25 you'll still be here claimin to hang with the dopest cats.....

*ohhhh aint it funny how things can changeeeeee
*now you realise you tried to punch out of your ranngeeeeeee
*even the pussy riders you have werent to blameeeee
*its coz you tried to act tough out of the real life you cant sustainnnnnnn
*so when theres nowhere to turn,this is where you came
*a life of modem love and aim conversations to heal your painnnnn

ring ring...ring ring...


Feed links :

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...853/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...397/index.html

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

lmfao jesus christ


just dont be mad,over every note you passed
look to a life of real relationships & not a modem past
and if you fall in love i hope it lasts
coz when i'm 25 you'll still be here claimin to hang with the dopest cats.....

the closer did it for me

[The Archetype]

lol... this was overall better than your last one... and i agree w/ gow... throughout the entire piece, it was average or just a touch above... but the last 4 lines struck me as hilarious... why do you have beef w/ her anyway?

[Celph Taut]

Lol @ your sig.

[The Incredible Hulk]

^Check her diss to djking 'and a shot at hulk'.. it came out of NOWHERE,ive never even spoken to her

appreciate the feed,this was more of a song i could do on audio...

my last diss was more of a text written diss...

[Well Versed]

jeez here we go again...mayn ur gonna make me drop my diss on Mariah...i thought bout not doing it...but ooooo i wanna bury that bitch...ight dude heres a lil feedback...

Beat:- 'i remember' - eminem diss to everlast

GOOD BEAT...i like how it was directed at Mariah anyway

*sung

*ohhhh aint it funny how things can changeeeeee
*now you realise you tried to punch out of your ranngeeeeeee
*even the pussy riders you have werent to blameeeee
*its coz you tried to act tough out of the real life you cant sustainnnnnnn
*so when theres nowhere to turn,this is where you came
*a life of modem love and aim conversations to heal your painnnnn

this was a pretty good hook...i liked how u said most of that...kinda catchy...n it really did hook me in...good job on that part...

with all the lies she lives,this girl cant be serious
you must remember the fear of your first period?
see your diarys empty,you want to flip it aight?
coz now its like i diss you and you diss me right?

all i can say is that first bar was CLASSIC...im sure they will say played out...but its still classic...2nd bar was a nice lil shot at a lil gurl...n ur last line just wasnt as good as ur first...but its all good...

i would say this bitch is tight,but in a true world
i dont wanna be fucking around with no kiddy school girl
but i aint the fool who stepped up and got shot away
back in the 08 you were good but nah not today,

lol first punch was a nice shot at her age again...word...i wouldnt talk to know fucking 16 yr old...2nd bar was pretty good...first line was a lil basic...but that second one had me laughing pretty hard...

fly away,escape after i murked your first yap
this a mans game,we dont wanna hear a bird rap,
and on the real facts the other week i heard it that
brandon broke his connection so you hurt him back

that first bar might have been a lil sexist...but still funny...liked that wording...2nd bar was a nice personal but i think ur wording should be different...still good shit

word to that,refuse his eyes to see where his cam aint bin to yet
but it must hurt loving someone so bad over the internet,
with your little skinny neck,you moved onto singing yet?
mariah 'we belong together',when i fuck you i guess nick is next
tryin' to hold your head up,after you tried to sting a vet
waiting for a call off brandon,is your phone ringing yet?.....
ring ring...ring ring...

lol more shots at their online love shit...that cam line was funny...lol that 2nd line hit much harder...ur 2nd bar was a nice play on words...lol stop rapping n start singing...im with u on that...3rd bar was good...lol another shot at her n brandon...funny n good personals...

we coulda been friends,but now i guess not
you chose the road of cyber love,instead of sex pot
and if heat gets hot and wants to hit you in your best spot
he remembers time is a killer,until he see's your breasts pop

lol even more cyber shit...first bar was pretty good...i liked tha wording on it...2nd bar was alot funnier...yet another shot at heat n her, n her age...that last line was killer...lol dam thats some funny ass shit...

but let us stop for a minute,coz i started thinkin
how you wanna be a cool kid,partyin' and drinkin
now i'm wondering what input your part is bringing
probably dwelling on brandons nuts and how hard they're swinging

first bar was ight...like a bigger setup for that next punch...but explaining how we all acted round her age...that last line was pretty good too...that input line was great...n another shot a brandon...dam...funny shit dude...

eat my heart out bitch,and face it
brandon never gonna see your pussy to taste it
its wasted,find a new hobbie and try to replace it
coz i'm sure another member will come along and take it

lol that first bar was fucking funny...real nice shot at em yet again...2nd bar was nice...i like how u called it a waste for her...yeah new hobbie i agree...last line was good...i like that new member shit...its only a matter of time...

just dont be mad,over every note you passed
look to a life of real relationships & not a modem past
and if you fall in love i hope it lasts
coz when i'm 25 you'll still be here claimin to hang with the dopest cats.....

wow...this part is tha best by FAR...i like that every note u passed shit...lol at MODEM PAST...last line was a great closer...similar to how i ended mine...but ur wording was wonderful...def diggin this drop...i didnt think u wud attack her again...shes avoiding u now...i saw her on yesterday...posting some random bullshit...well dude ill work on my diss to her...n show her how REAL this shit is...just cuz im on a computer doesnt mean i dont take it seriously...shit RANSOM is what i should call it...shes gonna get TAKEN...LMFAO...keep on writing that good shit homie...loved this one!!!

[Ink Poyzin]

*ohhhh aint it funny how things can changeeeeee
*now you realise you tried to punch out of your ranngeeeeeee
*even the pussy riders you have werent to blameeeee
*its coz you tried to act tough out of the real life you cant sustainnnnnnn
*so when theres nowhere to turn,this is where you came
*a life of modem love and aim conversations to heal your painnnnn

being that I didn't know they didn't live by each other I see now where your coming from. I like this for a hook, it fits good with this piece.

with all the lies she lives,this girl cant be serious
you must remember the fear of your first period?
see your diarys empty,you want to flip it aight?
coz now its like i diss you and you diss me right?
i would say this bitch is tight,but in a true world
i dont wanna be fucking around with no kiddy school girl

I like the switch up on this compared to the last one. It's more direct, your getting personal and I'm not losing myself in it, like before when I knew nothing about what u were talking about.

but i aint the fool who stepped up and got shot away
back in the 08 you were good but nah not today,
fly away,escape after i murked your first yap
this a mans game,we dont wanna hear a bird rap,
and on the real facts the other week i heard it that
brandon broke his connection so you hurt him back
word to that,refuse his eyes to see where his cam aint bin to yet
but it must hurt loving someone so bad over the internet,
with your little skinny neck,you moved onto singing yet?
mariah 'we belong together',when i fuck you i guess nick is next
tryin' to hold your head up,after you tried to sting a vet
waiting for a call off brandon,is your phone ringing yet?.....
ring ring...ring ring...

nice I like this too even more personal. lol @ bird rap I was cracking up. and the relationship hit I have to say that was pretty nice.. I see alot of power behind these bars.. alot of shit I myself would be pissed at if it got out.

we coulda been friends,but now i guess not
you chose the road of cyber love,instead of sex pot
and if heat gets hot and wants to hit you in your best spot
he remembers time is a killer,until he see's your breasts pop
but let us stop for a minute,coz i started thinkin
how you wanna be a cool kid,partyin' and drinkin
now i'm wondering what input your part is bringing
probably dwelling on brandons nuts and how hard they're swinging

I dont know what u mean by 'sex pot'.. not as personal as the first couple parts I have quoted, but still had a real nice flow to it..

eat my heart out bitch,and face it
brandon never gonna see your pussy to taste it
its wasted,find a new hobbie and try to replace it
coz i'm sure another member will come along and take it
just dont be mad,over every note you passed
look to a life of real relationships & not a modem past
and if you fall in love i hope it lasts
coz when i'm 25 you'll still be here claimin to hang with the dopest cats.....

lol I like this part.. I laughed my ass off to the first bar. the modem line lol this shit was funny I have to admit. and the last bar I have to say quite dope


I'm sorry if you took my last feedback as hatred or whatever. I just didnt know nothin about her. And I wasnt gonna go lookin up her past either to see whatever I can pull up on her. Now that I know it was a 'net relationship' alot of shit changed. I didn't like the way you flipped out though. I gave good feed and was just being honest. When I said I didnt know her enough to judge that shit.. And next time I think you should be more understanding about feedback, rather than be a cock about it. Would you have rathered me lied and say I knew what u were talking about before? But it's cool I guess..


What I think about this.....,
Overall I think this piece hit hard. You got real personal and I thought it was quite funny the things said. The flow was good, I was listening to the beat while reading it. The chorus I liked, it was cool, went great with it too. I would say for sure a solid diss piece, real personal.. I enjoyed it, keep writing.

[Mariah]

UH - ok then. I guess you actually want me to try then? I'll reply to this just because it's fun and easy, lmao @ you writing a full song to diss me though. This wasn't too bad, nothing spectacular like you promised you'd bring and now I'm kinda hurt that I read it only because it was mainly wack until the last 4. Overall, better than I've seen from you and not many people have a reason to diss me, so good job on doing what you did. Look for my response later. BWAHAHA!

[The Incredible Hulk]

^suck my dick bitch.......

full song?do you know how long it takes me to write a song?lmao...fuk off

[The Archetype]

lol @ Hulk's drunk ass

[Mariah]

^suck my dick bitch.......

full song?do you know how long it takes me to write a song?lmao...fuk off

you're repping me as dead in your sig and I'm alive. plus, this diss wasn't that good...my one punch toppled your whole thing.

[The Incredible Hulk]

lmao...you think that? ok...

you think that one punch beat my whole thing?seriously? ok...lets put it into a battling vote...if you're so confident

anyway...check the sig now..i apoligised...its stupid..i was a dick,i can see that...

hell i am the pathetic one for doing thus shit...i am sorry

[Mariah]

honestly. do what you want. I'm gonna diss you back, only reason I wrote that punch to you is because you dissed Cry and that's my CoMod bishhhh!

[The Incredible Hulk]

my diss to cry was shit..he is obviousl a good writer...blah

marry me?


^use that as a [prsonal

[The Incredible Hulk]

pesonal