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    Artist Of Anxiety

    I feel my eyes burning with this, such yearning for bliss
    With a despised guise, instantly churning my abyss
    Realm, that exists; I can’t help but glance at this spliff
    Whom prances amiss, with such savage reminiscence
    Of the past, I hear her screams of anguish, a weary trance
    Damage to my ears from within a blank Picture in which I glance
    Horrific visualization seems to advance, in which shadows are cast
    As my limited manifestation of the reason a demon should laugh
    As I am cast unto envisioning arms, and this collision starts
    An artform of a vast chimera of creativity,
    but in my era…….
    ………………………………….I paint despair and negativity……

    As I paint the pictures of time, I weave to a stricter and confined
    Place of drawing, As I stroke to design a plan, wicked and malign
    Unleashing my inner essence, of what I created at simplistics
    These artistic hands of mine, debated to elaborate characteristics
    As I collaborate wit my senses, cause this painted thought is endless
    It’s like trying to contemplate hieroglyphics, as we transcend
    To said voices as I stab the face of my creation in vehemence
    Hence, with my paintbrush broken quivering in an intense delirium
    With immense movement,
    I crawl to away from the portrait in which I was imprisoned
    This decision carried forth incisions to my objecting cranial instability
    Erecting a force of darkness, setting a painful sense of misery
    In a mystery of auras, devouring my suspense of irrationality
    Amass of urgent allergies arrive from beneath dense fatalities
    Of sections from the interior mind; from the melting wax in canvas
    Embedded in my bed of a Portrait, settling relaxed as a lavish
    Hand brings me back to reality, my life submits with a frail forfeit
    My illusion is complete and its written: “I’m unveiling a Portrait.”
    Percept Shun

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    Last edited by P. Mortuus; August 10th, 2008 at 11:14 PM
    Percept Shun

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    Re: Artist Of Anxiety

    wow this was fuckin sick, really perfected rhyme scheme, everything is everywhere which i like. nice multi's and ish. the imagery was fuckin deadly, this kinda inspiring me to write something really lyrical like this, so i think i might lol. but yea the whole storyline was still working because of the imagery. nice vocab. this is def hof worthy to me. nice shit

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    this was a dope piece
    i dont know why everybody is sleeping on this
    the multi's really put this flow together
    i didn't see any stretched/forced lines
    the vocabulary really stood out
    i don't see anything to critisize about
    good job
    i enjoyed it..

    wake up RB!!
    wow
    but on some serious shit
    this site isn't as active as it used to be
    Last edited by P. Mortuus; August 10th, 2008 at 11:15 PM

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    Re: Artist Of Anxiety

    2nd up wtf dont sleep on this
    Percept Shun

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    Re: Artist Of Anxiety

    As I paint the pictures of time, I weave to a stricter and confined
    Place of drawing, As I stroke to design a plan, wicked and malign
    Unleashing my inner essence, of what I created at simplistics
    These artistic hands of mine, debated to elaborate characteristics
    As I collaborate wit my senses, cause this painted thought is endless
    It’s like trying to contemplate hieroglyphics, as we transcend
    To said voices as I stab the face of my creation in vehemence
    Hence, with my paintbrush broken quivering in an intense delirium


    Dope.Dope.Dope.

    Nice work, dude, you had some great vocab in this.

    Keep this shit up.

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    Re: Artist Of Anxiety

    yp paramik can you rtf on my piece the bone collector...

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