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Lil Mama ft. T Pain & Chris Brown
My first remix. Check it out.
[soundclick]6492394[/soundclick]
Lil Mama ft. T Pain & Chris Brown
My first remix. Check it out.
This is a pretty decent mix, it just the beat doesn't fit the beat as much as it should, it sounds kinda outta place during most of the verses but its mixed well, i haven't did a remix in a while hell i think ima start on one. props
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
I actually liked this man... for the level you're on... I'm feelin this man... like it could be alot better but from where you were a lil while ago this is amazing lol
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we see you Cock-A-Roaches looking...
Coming Soon
Haha... thanks for feed peeps.
shit was on point..beats meshed preety good through out the whole thing
Thanks for feed.
If anyone can buffer this with the video it'd be muchly appreciated. Please put my soundclick at the bottom of the video too. "www.soundclick.com/illproducer" <---- download this remix there too.
Last edited by Trey Songz; April 26th, 2008 at 04:24 PM
lol yea this is coo. keep working on getting the formula right.
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I agree. and I agree with ZedOriginally Posted by Brandon Heat
You need to do trial and error constantly with concepts, chords, notes, sounds, mixing techniques before you can make a masterpiece. Youre on your way man - youre learning
Just make as much stuff as you can but remember to not spend more time an necessary - if its out of tune, whack, the wrong soung, should have different productive elements employed then change that shit or leave it. If you put enough time in youll get it. It wasnt til I started making music basicly full-time that I understoof how to make a real dope beat from the concept straight through to the instrumentation and mix
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You gettin better in the mix, but it really isn't there yet in your melodies. It doesn't really capture anything, plus the beat doesn't even go with the song tbh.
I really hate to say this but i gotta be honest on this one, I actually fell asleep listenin to this...needs way more energy, diff melody. but like I said, u gotten better in the mixing area, but still need alot more work.
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Thanks for feed peeps.
EDIT: Yea... thanks to Kris.... my mix is getting better. He told me that doing little things like taking off all of the bass on hi hats and taking off all the whatever on this other instrument, really gives you more room to work with. That's what I've been doing and peeps saying my mix is better.
Last edited by Trey Songz; April 27th, 2008 at 12:23 AM
damn@me not knowing you did a remix to this... lol
i just posted mine i worked on tonight
this joint was ok man. Your getting better, but you still gotta work on matching your notes. Cuz your bass is out of key witht he a capella, and so is the synth in the hook. It doesnt match Chris Brown's key.
The drums are coo as well. I would have used a diff snare for the feel you were going for.
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