a little rap i wrote, crituque this shit

[theXwhite50centX]

yo homie
i like to eat salami
then i hit ur mom and she sucks my shit
then i shit out my shit
shes a witch
she looks like a cow
that fat bitch
i like to rock out on the mic
your mom likes to rock out with my cock out
yeah
yeah
yo i ben through so much shit
i fuck the clit

just a little sketch i made, i kno it aint that good tell me some thigns i need to work on my fellow rappers.

[theXwhite50centX]

bump, anyone?

[Cliff.Hanger]

Dope!




Wanna battle? lol

[theXwhite50centX]

yeah lets battle how do we do it?

[Badfish]

rofl.......that shits dope son.....you need a contract.