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October 25th, 2005, 06:49 PM
#1
If I cant do it then It cant be done
Verse to 50-if i cant do it
Two hammers in the waist
bring ya clique, I wont hesitate
to jam them in ya face
you with me, you standing with the great
you diss me, Ill leave oyu planted in a grave
im demanding for the hate, youjust flattering me
I send you writtens who really wanna battle with me
well im packin the heat
up in healf of my jeans
so if you basterds speak
im hear to blast till you bleed
joes back in the street, im better than most
yeah I heard you, you bite what your second man wrote
if my second plan fold?
its cool i still kill you, plus ya man dying from the second hand smoke
ill blueface ya see dudes hatin the watch
i move paper and still dudes hatin to watch
two waist yall back when im sprayin the glock
slugs'll cross ya chest like yall prayin to god
im prayin for yall to get off me man
im spittin coffin man im killin em out here
im prolly the illest without gear
so if you aint feelin me i dont care
Last edited by Joe Millionaire; October 25th, 2005 at 06:55 PM
Reason: forgot to explain my verse
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October 25th, 2005, 06:50 PM
#2
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October 25th, 2005, 06:52 PM
#3
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October 25th, 2005, 07:35 PM
#4
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October 25th, 2005, 08:46 PM
#5
this was straight, the beginning was good but at the end it got a little choppy but its alright, you got some potential tho
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October 25th, 2005, 08:56 PM
#6
ight dog this was pretty bad i aint gunna lie
...no hate but lets just break it down
best verbal on the drop
if my second plan fold?
its cool i still kill you, plus ya man dying from the second hand smoke
even this was pretty shaky man just no verbals at all
best multie
...hate to say it but i didnt see n e
best show of lyrical skill
two waist yall back when im sprayin the glock
slugs'll cross ya chest like yall prayin to god
even tho this was still a pretty wack line i thought it was the only place that you showed that you can switch ya style up a lil bit
overall...sounded a lil nursery kiddie shit to me...self-glory spits cant match an intelligent drop
structure- 5 out of 10
flow- 5 out of 10
lyrical- 2 out of 10
verbals- 3 out of 10
overall- 4 out of 10
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