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Thread: !! WHAT WE FEEL ABOUT LIFE !! (not edited)

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    mcbadboy
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    !! WHAT WE FEEL ABOUT LIFE !! (not edited)

    Mc Badboy + Mcl

    First off I wanna big up this website
    Its giving young rappers some where to rhyme off the mic
    Cause you get loads of lil kids wanna to be stars
    If their not spitting their shooting guns living life behind bars
    Nowadays its an unreal imagery
    Lying up in the dead man cemetery
    Getting beat up lying in a no go situation
    I hate whats going on in this generation
    I know this om wont change whats going on
    plez don’t take the piss out of the noobs this is where they belong
    how would you feel if you had a child robbing cars
    giving other lil peeps cutting scars
    cause il tell u it aint really good
    having ur son coming home covered in blood
    children should be heard and seen
    keep them safe but let em keep the gangsta lean



    yo yo
    I think ur a piece of shit
    And when u rap everyone calls u a bitch
    And yo is a dog
    And u talk like a frog
    When u finger
    U think u r a singer
    Every time yo rap
    Il give u a slap
    Any time u fight u never get it right
    I thought I might tell u this aight

    I like beki lowe because I can flow
    Her hair is so fair
    Cause she’s cuddly as a bear
    She is so fit
    I never bring my kit
    Her ass is nice
    I cant name a price
    When she’s around
    I cant hear a sound
    When she call my name
    I don’t complain
    And then I miss my plane
    What cause me a lot of pain
    To ease the pain
    I smoked cocaine

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    mcbadboy
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    uppin for feed

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    mcbadboy
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    uppin 2#

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    JayKay
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    Honestly?
    MCL Your stuff wasn't horrible, but it wasn't exactly good either there was a little spelling error
    "Cause you get loads of lil kids wanna to be stars" See if you can find it.
    As for Mcfagboy's verse, that's worse than shit thats been sittin on the street for a week, the title was "What we feel in life" then you go on saying
    "I think ur a piece of shit
    And when u rap everyone calls u a bitch
    And yo is a dog
    And u talk like a frog
    When u finger
    U think u r a singer"
    Seriously... what the fuck. Your verse gets like a 1/10 at best. Shit.. Mcfagboy you go around givin people feed back such as "u can't rap man" well now I know why you think that, because you can't even yourself so you have no idea.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    i liked the first verse MCL but the second verse didnt follow the title ............ other than that i think its alright so over all ill say 5/10 at the LEAST
    Evry one is gonna die some day and when you do ..................... ill be there you can count on it

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    step your game up.
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    no. never again.

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    Yo, was this meant to be an answer to my "what's life" rhyme, cause if it was, it was shit, aight.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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    wtf at mc badboy.; that was absolutley the worst shit ever!!!!!
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    Poetry

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    Originally Posted by Vamp.
    this is perhaps the gayest thread...ALIVE....

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