10 -15 lines
house rules you spit first
unxtatic
Lethal Voice
10 -15 lines
house rules you spit first
checkin in....i'll prolly drop my shit within 30-45min...
yo do it in the other thread....it has both our names as the title
aight then take 30-45 minutes...i spit 30-45 after dat.....
U here on this board rappin, but why? i dont happen ta' know
u jumped on the rap bandwagon but got thrown back on the road
u aint gotta lethal voice, war? u dont want it, u'll sleep in dirt
so take ya funny accent to the bushes if u 'want peace (piss) on earth'
rumor has it that u homosexual---shit it looks like i've heard right
u at ya computer, lil fruity brother nibblin ya wood like a termite
u already destined to be dead------it's really nothin ta' talk
cuz widda name like lethal voice, its implied that u stuck in a box
matter of fact, i'ma end u, cuz u neva spittin anythin purposeful, foo
shit, it's obvious u dont wanna see the pane, so it's curtains fa' u
fuck...garbage...def not one of my good dayz...w/e, you're up......
I'm callin this a friendly fire jus like Bush did
cuz I'mma kill ya ass after the good feelin jus like puss did
oh my bad, ya shit is straight garbage, you said it yaself
lethal? hell yea, you on a mission of testin ya health?
you'll die, cuz I'm dangerous, deadly as Alonzo's kidney
you jus fuckin up, like Greene and Johnson at the trials for Sydney
Man, you the type that cant hold himself back once the mic is on
I still cant believe you started swallowin that microphone
well eat more and try to get phatter pound by pound
32 and jus got crushed by a 17 year old how does that sound?
shit aint the best either.....1st battle tho
yo sumbody vote.....
tought one, both did pretty good here..
UnXtatic:
U here on this board rappin, but why? i dont happen ta' know
u jumped on the rap bandwagon but got thrown back on the road
that's aight
u aint gotta lethal voice, war? u dont want it, u'll sleep in dirt
so take ya funny accent to the bushes if u 'want peace (piss) on earth'
plyed if u ask me
rumor has it that u homosexual---shit it looks like i've heard right
u at ya computer, lil fruity brother nibblin ya wood like a termite
lol
u already destined to be dead------it's really nothin ta' talk
cuz widda name like lethal voice, its implied that u stuck in a box
matter of fact, i'ma end u, cuz u neva spittin anythin purposeful, foo
shit, it's obvious u dont wanna see the pane, so it's curtains fa' u
ok part
ight say: 6/10
Lethal:
I'm callin this a friendly fire jus like Bush did
cuz I'mma kill ya ass after the good feelin jus like puss did
ok
oh my bad, ya shit is straight garbage, you said it yaself
lethal? hell yea, you on a mission of testin ya health?
played off his verse
you'll die, cuz I'm dangerous, deadly as Alonzo's kidney
you jus fuckin up, like Greene and Johnson at the trials for Sydney
nice one
Man, you the type that cant hold himself back once the mic is on
I still cant believe you started swallowin that microphone
well eat more and try to get phatter pound by pound
32 and jus got crushed by a 17 year old how does that sound?
good stuff, nice finisher
7/10...Lethal got the edge on this one but both did good..props...pz
Hit N Run
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thnx for the feedback....yo plz vote ppl....
haha berlin cats votin for eachtoher anywhoo unxtatic takes this quite easily with punches personals and just an overrall better and mor eenjoyable verse...word props to unx elevate lethal word
v/ unxt takes it by a mile
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aight, uppin #1 for votes...i'll return the favor if u drop a link
itte
Breakdown
unxTaxic took this..Better punches flow and structure he broke it down and kept his head on straight...Word play good and steady
Leathel-good battle but punches came weak,flow was itte...Structure needs work but u need 2 elevate..Wordplay alil weak but good...
Good battle im giving this to Unx/V.Ux
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itte hit up one of my battles in tha sig wita honest vote ..:uh ho
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uppin #2...i know this thread doesnt have a proper title, but dont sleep on this shit...
uppin #3, dont be sleepin on this shit............
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