Jus Spittin

[ThAjOkEr]

crazy as it sounds im conflicted to drop beats/
sit all ya back in ur seats and loose feelin of ur feet/
ill make it short cuz my rymes could write a book/
but that would leave u scared alil bit sick and shook/
so someone out here check it out give me props/
how i make ur hair stand up and u eardrums pop/
yall runnin crazy lick someone just got shot/
but its just me rappin something that u can stop/


tell me if im good when im high

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[REALISTIK]

this wasnt the greatest drop but u said you wanted to say ,............ your rymes were simple and nothing really amazed me .... hey yo for someone whos igh this shoulda been alot more tech man ........ when im high i just come up with some outovit shit that doesnt really make sense cause i get to tech but yeah
..you need to elevate yoll

hey return the favour man..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139244

[-uski-]

simple very simple not a great drop not one i would normally reply tombut im bored just elevate with most things ya know but ya structures alrite keep at it....remember to drop 2 links...

[jester]

i got one

i roll my weed the tightest as u kno
don't worry im just gettin in the flow
ppl aways bug cuz they donno
me im gonna conbust open
leaving u guys choken
its not my falt ur not good at token
i mean u guys need to blaze that shit
and hit it like a bitch that was asked twice
u kno punched in the eyes by obie trice

[...Blindeye...]

ThaJoker -

You drop was alright but weak. Your flow was ok but was nothing really amazed about. As REALISTIK when ur high you normally come up with some real strange shit. But ths wasent really any of that. Was a good drop But abit short...
Could do with better wordplay and creativity.

But a ok lil drop

[Unwritten Hazard]

to basic.



add all of rap lyric components and work at them. its more then just rhyming "book, shook, look,"

this aint dr sues.



did like the piece, 3-4/10...but hey, at least it rhymed