Deep Inside ~*Poem*~

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"Deep Inside"
I Live a Great life to the Opposing eye
My lIfe is great, but I cannot lie
inside My eyes is a cry for help
My family may seem Perfect
But Once inside there is a rift
So swift, cant be felt or delt with
Dealing with so Muching fighting
and BullShit, I'm Starting
to wonder if its all worth it
So Much pressure, combines to depression, Its hard to Find
my Destiny
Its all a Huge Lesson
that god has Given me
you Have to Live and Let go
cause this world can seem So low
all I'm trying to say
is that wether your On target
or way off Track
It all Just Stacks up
on mY SHoulder,
everyday I get older,
it just feels Like torcher
But its our Culture
I Shall Live my life My way
cause I am a Soldier

~*Alex Words Of A Legend*~

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Like it? >:P

[-uski-]

this was alright but not long enough in the Line man Try And Lengthen Ya Lines..that would improve ya structure and ya FLow..any way this was Alright Keep ELevaten Man And The Cicious Sptz Site is Alright Im Admin on iT

[¤KiNgPiN¤]

1.I don't usually use long lines lol,but I'll try
2. Vicious Spitz ya mean? Glad ya like it took me a while to make it :P