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Everybody knows when I talk it it’s doom
It’s true
Ayoooooooo!
Im a mix of hard n vicious, my trajectory rockin b
Check my archive reached my prime, while urs is an example of what not to be
N ur SAP pic? Trash bitch! ill piss on this dweebs circle
I mean we all know ur ‘Family Matters’, but I’ll put 2 straps to ya kid like Steve Urkel
If we got a problem - u ain't using fist 2 solve it player..
this bitch couldn’t count on his hands doing math with a 2nd grader
& ur whore bitch is nothing - I hit that pussy wit no respect..
sadly harassment everything 2 you, & u have to pester her for sex
Both fun to read
I like Ryno more
vote -Ryno
Im a mix of hard n vicious, my trajectory rockin b
Check my archive reached my prime, while urs is an example of what not to be
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If we got a problem - u ain't using fist 2 solve it player..
this bitch couldn’t count on his hands doing math with a 2nd grader
tough one ... and because of that i'll go with Dave/// both displayed great openings but fell short at the end
v-dave
Im a mix of hard n vicious, my trajectory rockin b
Check my archive reached my prime, while urs is an example of what not to be'
**Yeah, this had my laughin. Good punch
N ur SAP pic? Trash bitch! ill piss on this dweebs circle
I mean we all know ur ‘Family Matters’, but I’ll put 2 straps to ya kid like Steve Urkel
Another good hit. the straps on Urkel was funny as well. Saw the Steve Urkel before, but never flipped this way
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If we got a problem - u ain't using fist 2 solve it player..
this bitch couldn’t count on his hands doing math with a 2nd grader
**This is okay, but saw the count on the finger a few time. Still a descent hit
& ur whore bitch is nothing - I hit that pussy wit no respect..
sadly harassment everything 2 you, & u have to pester her for sex
The wordplay in the 2nd line was vicious. Great hit. pretty original
Okay, this battle was ILL forreall. Both participants brought the fire this week, but my vote goes to:
Vote - Ryno
Vote - Dave
Hard call. Dope battle. Rynos Trajectiry/arc I've punch was fire. The urkle punch felt stake, because I personally have done urkle/straps/suspender bars. It's well worded, so I won't completely discredit it. Just hit light for me.
David opening bar was light too, but humorous. The harassment bar was nice too. Really well executed.
This was a tough call. I think Rynos opener was the best bar, with Dave's closer a close second. But then I have Dave's opener edging Rynos closer. I can see this going either way. But I'm leaning Dave.
Yeah this battle was dope, I’ve come back to it 3/4 times now and gone a different way in my head each time but I need to stop fucking around and get a vote in. I think I had to break this down bar vs bar and still could barely pick between them. Bar 1 I though achieve was a decent opener, pretty clever with the amount going on in there, not a haymaker then Dave responds with exactly the same decent jab not a haymaker. I preferred Daves concept but rynos was worded slightly better. Second bar I liked rynos pretty direct and clean where as Dave again to me had a better concept and one of those bars I had to go back to catch the flip which I like.
I’ve changed my mind a few times again since typing this vote out so my personal favourite bar was dilly’s closer I liked the flip and the way he someone how made harrasment everything to you work both ways and it only just be very very slightly forced
Very close battle I enjoyed both
V/dave
to me this came down to Rynos 1st bar and Dave's second. harassment was TUFF and i think i gave it to dave the last time you both battled but this time around...i have to go with Ryno. The subtle in the wording here made this punch pretty fire imo. this could definitely go either way. dope bars from both.
v/Ryno
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subtlety*
Good battle. I’ve heard iterations of the counting on hands and Urkel straps stuff before, so those two kinda cancel each other out. I got Dave winning this on the strength of the harassment bar.
Vote- Dave
4-3 Dave
I got Ryno here… only because I hated Dave’s first bar but loved his second bar. I fucked with both Ry’s bar plus he had a nice personal. Dave will have a light bar then fire he’s slowly turning into a favorite read.
VRyno
I wasn’t feeling Ryno last bar n I wasnt feeling Dave first… so if comes down to their other lines n imma give it to Dave… her ass meant was fresh n smooth I haven’t seen that flip at all nice shit… ryno was dope to, dope wordplay from both ya I just happen to like his slightly more
Vote Dave
Dave wins