10 lines of horrorcore
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Due Friday the 9th.
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10 lines of horrorcore
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Due Friday the 9th.
this
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is my check
Ya man
I got my 10 ready to go @mv
@MV
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
YEAHHHHHH
MIRACLE --
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
DECENT BAR HERE..
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
I thought the best one was the MACHETE LINE..good bat there..
overall --
7.5/10
vs.
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
VERY GOOD VERSE MC.. i thought u did decent like 'MIRACLE..
BEST BAR -_ WENDIGO..
8/10
VOTE -- MV ..
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Re: HORRORCORE: MV vs Miracle (OPEN FOR VOTES)
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The best line from Miracle was...
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
because it flowed smooth and the style in these lines as well.
I think if Miracle had more wordplay in his punches then it would be better.
The best line from MV was...
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
because it was a good closer giving a laugh and it flowed well with the multis consistently hitting.
I felt the vocab used from MV really brought together the wordplay and caused the punches to hit.
My vote goes to MV.
Mvgt - Miracle.
Yes I know the focus is gory Imagery. I think his punch-driven approach conveyed more impactful imagery then MVs verse. I thought MV only edged the flow cat. Gruesome balls was fire.
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
formate is a little played
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
i dont get this.. maybe over my head
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
could be better
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
doest make sense.. do you mean finger as in fingerprints or sexually?
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
not good... might as well had said "he'd start harassing you about global warming"
vs
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
wendigo is forced and sheathed and wings dont rhyme
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
needs work... and again doesnt rhyme
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
better..still a little wordy though
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
worrdy but effective... thats really three lines
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gorito
dope but again.. wordy
vote-MV... i honestly thought Miracle would win this...ol' MV proved me wrong
Quote:
Originally Posted by miracle
Quote:
Originally Posted by MV
Feel like Miracle came a lil more polished and direct
I dig MV style it’s just text battle wise, thought Mir had a more well rounded verse
MV Kinda lost me a bit with some of the wording but that’s just me
Dope battle fellaZ, hard to pick a winner just comes down to preference ig
I’ll cut you into pieces.. rip ya dick off n feed it to my cat
Leaving nothing but a pair of gruesome balls, n we know you’ll never do that
What?
Start w/ ya neck then to your lower limbs. bite down n hold steady
Ya legacy a knife so big it’ll look like your family invented the machete
ehh.. nice flow tho..
w/ a razor I’ll carve off your skin, slice u open wit a sickening grin
Blades will enter embody until he can feel it in his bones there going in
ehh..
I’m the type of rapist to tape this.. then frame you for the slaughter
If the police wind up fingering u it’ll be a reenactment of what I did to ya wife/daughter
Nice bar here..
Take a chainsaw to this man’s skull. enjoy the show while I’m preforming
So much Gore in your face I’ll start harassing you about global warming
ehh finisher
things dont appear as they seem, Cherakee's Dreams every time my pen is unshealthed
in horrorcore if i wendigo unnoticed cuz; losing, defeat is inevitable when the demon got wings
Ehh opener
im here to tear ya flesh, the original G.O.A.T. to fear baphemet
slit your throat n take a bath n that, then plastic on ya baby face like a Cabbage Patch
That was tight.. much better
im vicious as it fucking gets, gas the play room then ill blame on some SIDS
to beat me to the punch there is only one right angle then its straight down your wrist
ehh.. nice set up tho..
this gift and curse beyond my decision, in la familia we go by tradition
questioning my technique will get you cut wit precision, its a weird transition from asking Y!!!??? to Y incisions
a lil stretched but Nice
nihilism leads hedonism n this is lethal, restrain you for 1 week to over feed you
tie you-beat you, till the meat starts to seep through and this fat greasy rapper opens up like a dropped Gordito
Nice finisher
Good battle here.. Miracle had a better flow but MV pull this one out with better punchlines and concepts dispite the slightly sstretched lines. Vote= MV