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~Disgraced Leaves~
Contorted limbs seen in the foreground of a crooked face
Define the landscape of this political race, in otherwords
Disgraced leaves tend to grow aimlessly about, in doubt
As a Body of astronomic wealth our seed is our only clout
Soiled tainted & stained have we drained our young viens?
What secrets to life, hold those that we pay to entertain?
Bare minds or bare arms? Lack of information brings harm
Truth sounds the Alarm, words like flesh are emensely bent
Fabrication's evident, much the same as hollywood breasts
Our Political Junk yards stock pile a mountain of broken men
Tokens spent in the pursuit of power.............................
.................................................a nd prestiege of trend
a melding of physical glory
eternal tale of the human story
rapturous bliss likened to happiness
only relief from the mental abyss
closest expirience for man of God
ephemeral break from life's facade
spirit, body, and mind intertwined
every thought of all falls behind
demuring to the call of the divine
transcendent joy, objective prime
blessed action beyond space or time
primal attraction innundates the mind
mental distraction, selfish love, be mine
my enjoyment ranks above yours in line
you wretched whore, i implore your resources
to flourish and fill me gorishly, while i bore through thee
my sword is never sheathed, until you're completely devoid of energy
bow to me, fall down to your knees, pleasure me, but you shall never suceed
insatiable, i am, i am man, you are the scarifice, you are my lamb, at my command
i dam your waters, take down your herds in slaughters, bastardizing your products,
your suns and daughters, your trees and leaves, synthesizing any of these
sympathizing not with your needs, taking more than i need to eat or breathe
die, wretched bitch, i love to rape thee, and how you berate me
and think that you can escape me...flooding and quaking
but only yourself are you breaking, quit faking
i see your skin, it's increasingly flaking
i see your kin, mine for the taking
not until we're through
i shall remain true
mother nature..
I need you...
bounce your piece was very good...succinct without being terse...a good mixture of intelligence and common sense with an ultimately human compassion for the deceiving of your fellow man...
9.0/10...could have been more, you sold that piece a lil short...(bloom said we can reply in here)
8.4/10 on the sublime scale (my personal scale based on what i know of your talent and what you're capable of)
^I hate the Sublime scale :(
Bounce you had a nice piece. Made me think. A good mixture of emotion and hardships of life.
Sublime yours was nice...really deep with intelect and emotion. Well done
Kicked out of Eden
Visions are slowly blurred as lonely figures merge into the sand
Melting desert heat burns through all, dehydration is at hand
Contorted bodys sink in the earth, while Eve's prayers rise up
God turns his head, as human shows first signs of bein corrupt
Human fault is inevitable, Their first test against temptation
Eve lured Adam to trouble, impossible to ever repay him
So he left her all alone, to let her vanish in Gods creation
Evaporate in the heat, in complete solitude. Desolation
Absolute Isolation, all she can do is think. Contemplate
Left with only his leaf, for her to remember her mistakes
Thanks to you 3 who participated. Check out next weeks