FLL WK1:Marion Motley Vs Wolv Ledr6 - Marion wins.

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Any chance you fine gentlemen can drop a vote?

V / mm

Thought he a couple decent hits where with wolv I only kinda liked the brown / discord thing but it was still technically really bad.

Both need to elevate
Its ok practice makes practice
Both need to work on punchlines, flow, & multies.
Mot had stronger vs for the win
vote-Mot

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Originally Posted by Erica Baddie

Both need to elevate
Its ok practice makes practice
Both need to work on punchlines, flow, & multies.
Mot had stronger vs for the win
vote-Mot

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lmfao @ practice makes practice

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Originally Posted by Wuxia

lmfao @ practice makes practice

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Mind voting? Since your here already.

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Originally Posted by WOLV LEDR6

Walked in the FL office first day on the job super spiffy hella proud,
Blowing a blunt so loud, Dave was like “in’that petrol I smell’n da house?”

-This was hit or miss. Pretty much just a straightforward joke. Would of been better utilized in audio or video battle. When it comes to text battling, expectations are much higher in terms of writing.

Smh …bruh it’s like literally the first round! You’ve got to be kidding me-giving me this sore clown,
Just look at the poor sap! WOLV bout to shit on the Brown like bigotry in the discord chat!

-This actually read mad smooth. Nice flow. But I was at a loss with the Discord reference. Perhaps some quotes to provide a backstory would have been helpful.

Watch ’em stumble to the snap, just to fumble through his rap in a horrible performance.
He’ likes floral bowls from Florence, and pulling a no-shows on opponents!

-This had a 2005-ish Illmaculate-esque delivery. Again. Nice flow. However, straightforward without any real substantive build other than the well-packaged rhyme scheme.

He’d rather shop for decor, and loves to run in slow-mo
Look no matter how you paint it— It’s curtains for this homo!

-Way too simple.

Text Royalty? Puleease …silly-hillbilly-this’ well written-inbred-crimson-coated- crooked-teether,
Last time a Patriot shit on the throne on screen this bad, Mel Gibson was in Theaters.

-I actually enjoyed the punch but not the setup. It had a cheesy slapstick feel to it.

His bitch? Man I swear the Lord dissed her, hands like an orc’s sister! Toes?
Harrier than if Frodo was Wookiee! U know—body’s hella busted, but her face kinda meh—calls her his “Harfoot Pussy!”

-Kind of chuckled. Not really though.

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The highspots of this verse were the rhyme schemes and their fluidity, it also felt charismatic.

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

MM verse



This fed-issue Wesson on an alpha wolf finds beta tendencies
Since you said some Matrix shit to me, I grab the Agent Smith and squeeze

-Not feeling this. Rather blandish variant flip of a Matrix concept.

Dual pipes made a mess, bet the cops are gettin squeamish
When I raise the twins on Wolf, it ain’t Romulus & Remus

-Not a fan of indirect flex bars.

Yeah he went to prison, it was quite sad and gross when
The opps put wood in Wolvy’s guts, no climax from Logan

-Didn't like the creative-level of this nameflip. The setup did nothing for the punchline.

Get a Halo when I aim and make a plasma throw that sticks
You ain’t no Ledr, that’s a Reach if you actin Noble 6

-You know what? I thought this was fire.

Bring a Louisville Slugger just to swing at you bastards
Drop in on Wolfpac with a bat like I’m Sting in the rafters

-I'll accept this too. You needed this. Coupled with the last bar you were able to distance yourself from your opponent by a wide margin.


Spear him in the kidneys til he’s pissin the proof away
If Wolv a Renal Condition, it’s not Michigan 2-a-days!

-Got to be honest with you. Not a great bar.

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MM was the clear winner here.

vote - MM

Nothing
Vs
Dual pipes made a mess, bet the cops are gettin squeamish
When I raise the twins on Wolf, it ain’t Romulus & Remus

Wolves verse was put together nicely but didn’t really have any decent punchlines, discord chat was closest thing to a hit. Mm has a pretty average verse too but had actual punchline and light jabs
V/mm

Marion Motley wins 6-1.