B.R.E Presentz:[Insert deep title here...]

there was only a problem i had living my life,not taking time to look outside at all the strife/
and my personality gettin darker than night,i can't take it no more,bout to end it wit my knife/
I was blind and dumb to all the poverty in the city,picture of the slums in New York:Real Shitty/
I wouldn't want to live in the Bronx if I had money, because i would want to lead a better life,not a hood dummy/
If I had a chance, i wouldn't try to be gangsta,but God made me who I am,thats why i thank ya/
And if I could ever choose a place to live, it'd be the Bronx, cuz it made me who I am today,writing these songs/
And I would never choose a different lifestyle because that what makes me,saves me, from a harsh dose of reality/
And i would never take my own life because life is too beautiful,can't be thinkin thoughts like this in my own youthful/
And the old man shaking from the cold amazed me,it was like "wow", so i gave him my coat, i ask you who is blind now?

I LIKED THIS

thanks yo, still uppin this

I liked it... Very deep, very deep for sure....

Peace out

Dan Solo.

uppin this shit, don't sleep, i'll make sure i hit yas up

you do me a solid read unskrypted perfect diss then my retaliation tell me what you think please

tight............stuck with the title it was deep...............uppin fam

thanx for all comments, uppin this

ya people stay sleepin....

it was decent, couldn;t it have been longer,no? anyway the flow and overall fell was good,

keep droppin'!

uppin this still and my other piece blackout 2

uppin

It was good, lacked length in my eyes.

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uppin it again