Originally Posted by
Echelon
I'm a JUDGE WITH A MALLET THE APPARATUS OF BROKEN CABBAGE..<-BAD!
SOAKEN MAVERICKS AND broke to bits(LEAD A HORSE TO SLAUGHTER/WATER) <- wtf
I am the broken habit..soaken maverck of a horsemen of light <- poor poor spelling
Storming with ice..forcing the light down your gullets <-if the first part was written better this could have been
You have no gumption in this refferal..settle for more!??
Ready your score like give me a 10..give me a 10..give me a 10 <- no
I have broken punchlines from heading punching bags(NO PUNCHES)
eating lunches bymyself ..whole pizza's and burgers <- Excellent line. Saved the whole thing.
Smoke GODZILLA AND KING KING AND SMOKE HERBS <- uh what?
Choke verbs and smoke bongs and sing songs <- ok
For I am sentencing the rapture to torture where we will torture the raptor <- the fuck did the raptor do to you, b?
This is evisceration destroying disaster.. <- this is a line that is usually followed with something