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My cousin wanted to rap with me and do a song about money...So, this is what I did with him last night...
He's new to rapping...So, I've been schooling him on the fundamentals...Please, and and all feedback will be helpful and appreciative...
Hook: Me and him
Verse 1: Tha Q
Verses 2: Tay Stacks
Holla
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...71#post8191971
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...594/index.html
beat is kinda hot, bump this shit in the hoopty... hook is decent, not great, just a little too plain... your verse is on point, sounds a little uninspired for you but it's still decent... your cousin' sounds pretty good, flow is on point and his delivery is good for the beat... not bad...
^Yea...thank you bro...You're dead on with this feed...cuz, before we did this track, I told him that I really didn't wanna do a "money" topic track...but, I came with my own unique spin on it...And I'll let him know you said he did a good job...I'm proud of him...he gets more confident with every track.
Preciate it
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^Yea...thank you bro...You're dead on with this feed...cuz, before we did this track, I told him that I really didn't wanna do a "money" topic track...but, I came with my own unique spin on it...And I'll let him know you said he did a good job...I'm proud of him...he gets more confident with every track.
Preciate it
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blah.. the beat is cool. definitely could've been a hot song. to me it's just decent though. could be alot better. this came off as more uninspired run of the mill rap. it's iight, not a bad song. not a particularly good one though.
First off beat is hott. Not really feeling hook no hate. This is a diffrent track from you but delivery wise u was nice i like seeing that u can fuck with diffrent styles. Ur cuz had the ill swag for this type of joint though his flow was nice. Lyricall was ok but like u said i can hear he got the confidence so with ur mentoring n shit i can see him being hott. Keep doing it Q i got much respect for ur talent man. 1
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Originally Posted by Daz
I feel you...but you should realize that this is his 2nd time rapping...EVER. I basically set this track up so that all he had to do was come on here and take it home...I'm experienced with rapping...But, I didn't want to overshadow my cuzz...I wanted to set him up so he could bang out a hot joint...I get what you're saying though...but, flow wise, I think he hit it...Lyrics will come in time...
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chorus is swaggadocious... shits hot for the style you comin wit no doubt
your cuz got a simple flow, but damn you heard these cats on the radio? iono why people get so offended when they hear shit like this on boards... its fuckin rap... trust me, I love me some underground rap, and almost all of my music is underground... but i fucks with this still and guaranteed my homies would bump this if the quality was better. the chorus is hot, sounds a lil muffled... but i doubt you put in the time on the mix
keep doin your thing Q
^Thanks...and the quality was compromised because I did my part on Audition...mixed it down...and had to do my cuzz part on CEP
lol
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dope beat and dope song this gotta radio top 40 feel u could get some air time with this
^Preciate da feed
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