KB - Know Your Place (No, Your Place) (NEW!)

So this is the first song I recorded since my good brother C Beal went to rest in eternal peace. We did every song together, anyway. This is the first song I done with out him cuz he mixed everything. But this is just a snippit, feedback will be much appreciated in any form, and returned.

[Feed Link]
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...960/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...883/index.html

SONG LINK
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Lyrics:
Know your place, that’s what I was told when I was holdin ranks/
Flowin banks, money , from the funds, damn it’s going great/
Colder then a soliders plate, hotter then the load of weight/
That they bringin back, from Iraq, plus they pullin 8/
Bodies from the dirt, to the golden gates, no it aint/
true, lord, please tell me, how the hell to motivate/
I don’t know if I’m control of life but I control my fate/
You relate? Never say it’s true, if you know it aint/


Thanks again and enjoy!

Iigh what happened to ur voice man u sounded a bit like snoop damn that was short as hell flow was pretty cool delivery was unique as it always has dunno.if that's a good thingtho lol

Overall this wasn't too bad def wanna hear the full version

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You sound like you tryin'a be quiet, Your voice sounds like an old school westcoast rapper, I digs but this was short as fuck and kinda ends abruptly... I was expecting somethin' longer, good shit though stay up

thanks and much appreciated guyz.

UPPIN

ups 1 mo time

i liked this shit....other than waaaay to short...your voice is dope..original....the flow was ok a little choppy but your rhymes were ill...finish this track and re post that shit...nice drop