Not good enuff but still BETTER THEN U

I need passion to write - my mind's frantically dry
I see flashes of light - my life's passing me by
i've been asking to fight but i don't wanna tradegically die
just wanna master the rhyme and have these cats in line
and have them smile while there autograph is been signed
you gotta just love it - what other reason if not public
you work to get paid, besides i don't want my rap to die in the dirt of my grave
without getting the worth out of the work that i made
i want the whole world to know they've heard what i sprayed
cos i'm worth something great aslong as to these words some relate
cos no matter what you try there's always birds that will hate
worms that debate strictly for the sake of hurting our fate

"like they ain't never heard of a word of maybe give me a break"

could murda the state with the very same verse in this take
if it earned me some cake, yea i swear i yearn for the jac
and i got a little baby girl whose world is my fate
"daddy loves you" so i gotta keep the world off her weight
pay her life school tuition before she get to the learning estate
fuck having to worry if she study or how the term is been paid
her choice cos my money make her childrens children live great

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