Artist Of Anxiety

I feel my eyes burning with this, such yearning for bliss
With a despised guise, instantly churning my abyss
Realm, that exists; I can’t help but glance at this spliff
Whom prances amiss, with such savage reminiscence
Of the past, I hear her screams of anguish, a weary trance
Damage to my ears from within a blank Picture in which I glance
Horrific visualization seems to advance, in which shadows are cast
As my limited manifestation of the reason a demon should laugh
As I am cast unto envisioning arms, and this collision starts
An artform of a vast chimera of creativity,
but in my era…….
………………………………….I paint despair and negativity……

As I paint the pictures of time, I weave to a stricter and confined
Place of drawing, As I stroke to design a plan, wicked and malign
Unleashing my inner essence, of what I created at simplistics
These artistic hands of mine, debated to elaborate characteristics
As I collaborate wit my senses, cause this painted thought is endless
It’s like trying to contemplate hieroglyphics, as we transcend
To said voices as I stab the face of my creation in vehemence
Hence, with my paintbrush broken quivering in an intense delirium
With immense movement,
I crawl to away from the portrait in which I was imprisoned
This decision carried forth incisions to my objecting cranial instability
Erecting a force of darkness, setting a painful sense of misery
In a mystery of auras, devouring my suspense of irrationality
Amass of urgent allergies arrive from beneath dense fatalities
Of sections from the interior mind; from the melting wax in canvas
Embedded in my bed of a Portrait, settling relaxed as a lavish
Hand brings me back to reality, my life submits with a frail forfeit
My illusion is complete and its written: “I’m unveiling a Portrait.”

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wow this was fuckin sick, really perfected rhyme scheme, everything is everywhere which i like. nice multi's and ish. the imagery was fuckin deadly, this kinda inspiring me to write something really lyrical like this, so i think i might lol. but yea the whole storyline was still working because of the imagery. nice vocab. this is def hof worthy to me. nice shit

this was a dope piece
i dont know why everybody is sleeping on this
the multi's really put this flow together
i didn't see any stretched/forced lines
the vocabulary really stood out
i don't see anything to critisize about
good job
i enjoyed it..

wake up RB!!
wow
but on some serious shit
this site isn't as active as it used to be

2nd up wtf dont sleep on this

As I paint the pictures of time, I weave to a stricter and confined
Place of drawing, As I stroke to design a plan, wicked and malign
Unleashing my inner essence, of what I created at simplistics
These artistic hands of mine, debated to elaborate characteristics
As I collaborate wit my senses, cause this painted thought is endless
It’s like trying to contemplate hieroglyphics, as we transcend
To said voices as I stab the face of my creation in vehemence
Hence, with my paintbrush broken quivering in an intense delirium


Dope.Dope.Dope.

Nice work, dude, you had some great vocab in this.

Keep this shit up.

Hit up LEON

yp paramik can you rtf on my piece the bone collector...