KiLa-Mc vs kev18

12 lines...explain your votes people...1 day limit...give this dude a chance to see this...

like a car crash you be "pranged to bitz"....this skanks a bitch....caus even if you was the "clothes on my lines" you still couldn't "hang with this"//bang ya

spits....ya dumb arse....in no way do ya barz "sum up class"....but u be like the champ of breathing compz how you "known to cum up last"//

leave ya lungs crushed fast....stop "flapping" ya gumz or this "duck be running"....as ur infatuations caus premature ejaculations so u literaly are "up and coming"//(signature)

fucked and dun in....having ya mouth stuffed with blokes be tha only time u told you "spitting it nice"....i aint an addict so i wont be "sniffing ya lines"...but look to me or god either way we be "giving ya signz"// :flipoff:

spit ya 12, i can't think anymore....7:10am here...

killa mc//dis fool cum try 2 diminish me.
just 2 c if ide turn up an rym at dis lil g.
but i cant lose again that;ll make 3.
i cant b avin that now can i m8y.
but neways killamc if u killamc den u mist me.
look like i slipped tho da net.
cum bk turn u in2 a bitch ass pet over a bet.
GET//SET//GO
im jumpin in2 a diffrent flow if u dnt like soo.
shut up listen up its my tym this is da k3v show.
an if dis was on da M/I/C ide av 2 watch u D/I/E.
my ryms can turn ne mind crazy.
stutering and all dazey u just fukin lazy.

is ne 1 gon vote

need votes

upping 4 votez.........smartarse....changed your signature...nice move haha..good luck bruv.

Kila-Mc best-
bang ya spits....ya dumb arse....in no way do ya barz "sum up class"....
but u be like the champ of breathing compz how you "known to cum up last"//

~VS~

K3V18 best-
killa mc//dis fool cum try 2 diminish me.
just 2 c if ide turn up an rym at dis lil g.

KiLa-Mc - ok much improved bar and rhyme structure- try'n lay ur lines like I did above- ur rhymes fell off from tha last battle u had- ur attempt at wordplay was mediocere- u need harder punches/focus on personals- more multis- and stay away from words like pranged, arse, and duck overall the flow was tolerable-

K3V18 - wtf? did you text ur battle in on ur cell phone?- hard as fuck to read-
ur first bar was the best- it attempted a multi- wordpay was nonexistant- ur rhymes vocab was limited- dont 'switch ur style' in a 6bar verse. other then the first line, u had no hopes at winning....

keep workn on ur shyt- both need to elevate

v/ KiLa-Mc

hey, im outta ups on my battle vs Assisted Suicide- [link below] check that shyt n leave some feedback- thnx

feedback is always appreciated- check the other 2 in my sig too...-

i wud giv out a fair vote but not enuff posts as yet soz i owu

nah, just leave feedback- i know u cant vote yet- still read it n leave ur 2 cents

thankz 4 tha tip'z.....uppiiinnnn still!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

flow-killa
punches-killa
structure-killa
matas-killa

u did alright killa for a newb keep it up man

v/killa

thankz bruv...............................uppiiiinnnnnnnn nnnn