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10-14 lines
no feed
no hate
no dr
checkins due sun.
verses due wed.
Aite im checkin in on this bitch, miss where ya at?
Checking in honey just waitin on u
aite, i did my verse and i saved it too a disk, i fergot my disk at home, ill have it tomarrow. nani it'd be good if you got your shit done because im droppin on the last day.. soo w/e just some advice
haha bitch i bet you wont even drop... neways here it is
hey bitch, i just had a glare at yer sig
it reminded me of bigfoot, with all the hair on yer lip
beware of ma shit, it hits the fan and gets yer head
spit your best, cuz my dicks watin for your "kiss of death"
shit your breath, you havent brushed up in a while
still got that loss with queen stuck in tha files.. ill drop more later, shittin bell rang
nani's about to show ya fluke ass how its done
yea its that cut throat bitch livin in the gulliest slums
lyrically kill yall lames witout the cock of a gun
ya how many wins got? huh negative one (ha ha)
but seriously but if words could kill best to believe u'd be dead
cuz these bars would be like clip after clip in ya head
come on now i got u savin ya bars on a disk so it can get proof read
yea i kno u gettin mad like "yo thats not what i said!!!"
u ain't gotta say it i can see right through u
my niece was lookin at the screen guess what her first words were......DOO DOO
i had to put that doo doo part in there cuz it really happened lol
cant edit my post... lol anyways here it is
it only took a second, just a glare at ya sig
ITS BIG FOOT!... wait, its just the hair on yer lip
beware of ma shit, it hits the fan and gets yer head
spit your best, cuz my dicks watin for your "kiss of death"
shit your dead, your attractive? haha listen to that
hmm, fuck you or.... nah, i'd rather eat shit inna bag
all it really takes to win is the stroke one one key
i need more of a challange, no more battlin monkey's
im bored.. im so bored im sighing breathing in....
its sinking in, beat me with that^? think again
oh well im done, vetes people
First of all, both ya rhymes could be improved but there's always room for improvement right?
Miss Nani,
u ain't gotta say it i can see right through u
my niece was lookin at the screen guess what her first words were......DOO DOO
I thought this shit was wack...No real words simple punches through ya whole shit
Arelgy,
It was simple but still took miss nani
v/arelgy
eh this was weak....
Nani-You had no punches just self glory which is bad..no personals flow and strcuture were decent this is a 3/10
Alergy-You attempted punches and personals..as far as ur structure n flow you had some flow and ur structure is pretty decent you get a 5/10
v-alergy
I Wasn't Really Gonna Try When He Didn't Even Have 10 Bars By The Deadline It Was A Waste Of My Time I Though That Was The Rules?
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The minimum line limit is 10 lines., no less with no exceptions. If I see that you dropped under 10 lines I WILL DQ you. This is your warning.
sooo lemme me kno wassup wit that
Miss nani-
nani's about to show ya fluke ass how its done
yea its that cut throat bitch livin in the gulliest slums
^^no
lyrically kill yall lames witout the cock of a gun
ya how many wins got? huh negative one (ha ha)
^^pretty good
but seriously but if words could kill best to believe u'd be dead
cuz these bars would be like clip after clip in ya head
^^eh
come on now i got u savin ya bars on a disk so it can get proof read
yea i kno u gettin mad like "yo thats not what i said!!!"
^^good
u ain't gotta say it i can see right through u
my niece was lookin at the screen guess what her first words were......DOO DOO
^^lol
Arelgy-
it only took a second, just a glare at ya sig
ITS BIG FOOT!... wait, its just the hair on yer lip
^^i didnt see any hair on her lip
beware of ma shit, it hits the fan and gets yer head
spit your best, cuz my dicks watin for your "kiss of death"
^^eh decent
shit your dead, your attractive? haha listen to that
hmm, fuck you or.... nah, i'd rather eat shit inna bag
^^nah
all it really takes to win is the stroke one one key
i need more of a challange, no more battlin monkey's
^^nah
im bored.. im so bored im sighing breathing in....
its sinking in, beat me with that^? think again
^^ah nah man
I think miss nani had better punches and concepts...........i wasnt feelin any of your verse Arelgy...............
VOTE miss nani
Hit up my battle against pope and vote honestly plz
i thought arelgy came harder.. it was a good effort on both parts.. nani got some skillz, came with some kool shit,.. just felt arelgy hit on a few spots, the hair line was funny, close battle.. not many quotables tho.. alot of things were even so i went on punch power and consistancy so, vote =arelgy
hit this up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...02#post2044002
Rules are rules. You posted under the limit on time.Quote:
Originally Posted by Miss Nani
And then expect to post a whole verse, after the due date.
Not gonna happen, Miss Nani wins by default.